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The Perfection Trials



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Fri Jul 01, 2022 9:08 pm
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"Perhaps. Psychology states that it's impossible to train an animal to do something against its nature." Alex stood up. "So, you can't train a pigeon to fly to get food. You can't train a raven to return to consider one specific location home the same way a homing pigeon does."

Xe froze, staring off into space for a moment. "The Perfection Trials is an impossible experiment."

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“Hi Omni can I request wist get the role mom friend :]" ~winter
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Fri Jul 01, 2022 9:13 pm
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"So we'll beat it." Sadie shrugged, deciding to resume her casual air, even if it was a bit tenser now than before. "Punk them and take their money then leave. Easy peasy."

"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus
"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
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Fri Jul 01, 2022 9:38 pm
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"Yes. The money's a bonus, but-" They furrowed their eyebrows. "-what about their success stories?"

Xe started pacing, chewing thoughtfully on the knuckle of their thumb. "If it's impossible to train someone to be perfect, is Dr. Mallory lying about her success rate or is something more going on? We need to get into that facility and meet someone who's actually at the perfect part. Are they any different? How do they measure perfection?"

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“the wist i knew would never allow a straight boy in their stories” ~Omni
“Hi Omni can I request wist get the role mom friend :]" ~winter
“ah yes, fear Wist's smile :) <- speaks of layers and layers of secrets” ~mint
  





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Fri Jul 01, 2022 9:46 pm
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“If they’re supposedly perfect, then they aren’t going to be ratting on their overlord,” Sadie pointed out.

"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus
"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
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Fri Jul 01, 2022 10:30 pm
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"I know that. But maybe we can see what makes them perfect. Are they actually perfect, or did nine hundred people sell out and pretend to be perfect for more money than we could imagine?'

Alex stopped pacing and faced Sadie. "Is it an experiment, or is it a scam? Are people perfect now, or just greedy like they've always been?"

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“the wist i knew would never allow a straight boy in their stories” ~Omni
“Hi Omni can I request wist get the role mom friend :]" ~winter
“ah yes, fear Wist's smile :) <- speaks of layers and layers of secrets” ~mint
  





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Fri Jul 01, 2022 10:35 pm
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“Perfect people don’t exist,” Sadie said firmly.

"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus
"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
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"Exactly! So not only could we get rich, but we could unveil an international scam and go down in history as the ones to bring it to an end." Alex laughed. "No more creepily spying on people or handwritten letters or strange women named Emily who barely seem human. All because of us." They grinned. "How does that sound?"

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“the wist i knew would never allow a straight boy in their stories” ~Omni
“Hi Omni can I request wist get the role mom friend :]" ~winter
“ah yes, fear Wist's smile :) <- speaks of layers and layers of secrets” ~mint
  





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Fri Jul 01, 2022 11:13 pm
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"Mm..." Sadie let her head fall back against the wall and closed her eyes. "One step at a time, dude. I'd be satisfied with a few hundred bucks and sticking it to them with this outrageous room service bill."

"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus
"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
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Fri Jul 01, 2022 11:17 pm
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Alex's face fell. "Yeah, yeah. Sorry." They sat back down, awkwardly looking away from Sadie, face burning with embarrassment.

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“the wist i knew would never allow a straight boy in their stories” ~Omni
“Hi Omni can I request wist get the role mom friend :]" ~winter
“ah yes, fear Wist's smile :) <- speaks of layers and layers of secrets” ~mint
  





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Sat Jul 02, 2022 2:06 am
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Sadie cracked an eye open, feeling like a jerk that she'd shot them down. "...don't be sorry... It would be cool... I'm just a pessimist."

"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus
"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
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“No, I get it. That place probably has the security of the White House if the Avengers worked there. I doubt we’d be able to find anything.” Alex looked back her, forcing a small smile on xer lips. “I just got carried away.”

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“the wist i knew would never allow a straight boy in their stories” ~Omni
“Hi Omni can I request wist get the role mom friend :]" ~winter
“ah yes, fear Wist's smile :) <- speaks of layers and layers of secrets” ~mint
  





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Sat Jul 02, 2022 2:18 am
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"It's good to be passionate." Sadie shrugged and closed her eyes again. She felt ill; she definitely shouldn't have been so gluttonous. "I'll be able to get into their database once I get my laptop back. Will take me a little while, depending on how good their security is, but it usually doesn't take me more than a few days. A week, tops." She smirked a little, cracking an eye again. "I'll even let you nickname my spyware if you like."

"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus
"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
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Sat Jul 02, 2022 2:24 am
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Alex gasped. “You have actual spyware?” Their eyes lit up, a genuine smile taking over their face. “Is it hardware or software? How does it work? Are we going to have to sneak into the head office and hack into the router? Are we-“ Xe froze. “I’m going to stop talking now and let you answer.”

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“the wist i knew would never allow a straight boy in their stories” ~Omni
“Hi Omni can I request wist get the role mom friend :]" ~winter
“ah yes, fear Wist's smile :) <- speaks of layers and layers of secrets” ~mint
  





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Sat Jul 02, 2022 2:28 am
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Sadie grinned despite herself, endeared by their enthusiasm. "Spyware is just software you hide in their computer to monitor activity without them knowing. Have you heard of FinSpy?"

"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus
"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
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Sat Jul 02, 2022 2:32 am
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They shook their head. “No, I haven’t. What is it?”

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“the wist i knew would never allow a straight boy in their stories” ~Omni
“Hi Omni can I request wist get the role mom friend :]" ~winter
“ah yes, fear Wist's smile :) <- speaks of layers and layers of secrets” ~mint
  








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