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I'm looking for some help



After you've read some of my book, who's your favorite character?

Zita
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Kivvien
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Emily
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They're all awful
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Fri Apr 27, 2018 5:45 pm
Teddybear says...



I'm writing a book, and I'd like some help. The basic premise is Zita, my MC, runs away from her life-long adopted home in a fictional queendom called Fable (there's a history there, I'm really big on the world-building, there are no coincidences) and runs into some people on the road. Those people are called slavers (but she doesn't know that at first) and she's saved by a boy named Kivvien, who kills them all and thoroughly freaks her out, but, she knows she won't survive on her own, so she goes with him to a 'kid stop' which is basically a safe place for kids who don't have anywhere else to go. The plot revolves around the slavers being taken down, but there are a few plot twists that keep things interesting, along with some subplots I think are fun.
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Sat May 19, 2018 9:43 pm
WritingPrincess says...



Hi! I really like your story and if you’d like us to be buddies, I’d be more than happy to do so! :D
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Mon May 21, 2018 1:28 pm
Teddybear says...



Okie doki, we can chat about that when we're both online okay?
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