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Burning Rejection



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Thu Apr 05, 2018 4:19 pm
Bellarke says...



@ThatGeekyGirl, and @269609 presents.....Burning Rejection!



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Spoiler! :
((@Danni88 Here yah go. We dont have anything else RN))

Loki comes to Earth, and when he does, he meets Her. By her I mean Isabelle Rineheart, average collage girl. And what he does not expect to happen, happens.
Last edited by Bellarke on Thu Apr 05, 2018 5:39 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Thu Apr 05, 2018 4:29 pm
fatherfig says...



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We should play this out.
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig





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Thu Apr 05, 2018 4:34 pm
Bellarke says...



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You can play loki's part. I will play Emilia's. So I can post first chapter later to show you what I mean. Or you can about loki, and why he was on earth, and all that.
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Thu Apr 05, 2018 5:47 pm
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I could play Isabelle's brother/sister? Or a love rival?
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Thu Apr 05, 2018 5:49 pm
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Spoiler! :
Its okay with me, I guess, just have to ask 269609...
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Thu Apr 05, 2018 5:51 pm
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Spoiler! :
Love rival when she rejects him you should console Loki like I would never hurt you like that Loki.
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Thu Apr 05, 2018 5:54 pm
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Yeah sounds good to me gimme a sec to create someone
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Thu Apr 05, 2018 6:03 pm
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Spoiler! :
OK
Name: Julia Penderwick
Age: 18
Ethnicity: Half American and half Scottish
Backstory: Her parents are very rich. She goes to the same college as Isabelle Rineheart but doesn't like her because Isabelle [we'll figure that out later].
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Thu Apr 05, 2018 6:05 pm
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Spoiler! :
CHAPTER ONE IS DONE!!!!!!


Isabelle



I pull my hood over my head, as the rain beats on my back, and turning the sidewalk slick against my feet.

The clouds in the sky are so dark, it would look like night, if it were not for the

God, i hate it here. I think to myself as I walk into the Art hall at Rhode Island School Of Design.

"Hey, Izabelle." A voice yells from behind her. "What are you doing here? Weren't you banned?"

I turn and see Dareal leaning against a canvas. "No. I was not banned, because I know how to tell the truth."

I walk over to my canvas, and pick up my brush, and continue working on the picture of the god that has ruled my childhood.

Thor.
Spoiler! :
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I love how well his head gear is going, so I decide to leave for the night.

I walk to my car, parked on the curb, and I realize that the door is slightly ajar, so I grab a stick and slowly walk towards my car, easing the door open, to see a man, or rather boy around my age, his black hair hanging in dark shadows around his pale face.

"Ummm....Hello???" I whisper.
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Thu Apr 05, 2018 6:08 pm
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How about 269 does the next chapter and I do the third one from Julia's POV?
Love the Thor bit XD
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Thu Apr 05, 2018 6:11 pm
Bellarke says...



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Yeah. And the Thor part, i was gonna do Loki, but then I thought If she loves Loki from childhood, she will know its him. So that might start it up, it being Thor. Could you see the picture though??
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Thu Apr 05, 2018 6:21 pm
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Yes I can :)
And I think it's better you do Thor as that is a nice twist
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Thu Apr 05, 2018 6:22 pm
fatherfig says...



I am running from Hela and have to disguise myself as a human on earth.

I run down the street from where I first teleported

I see a car and decide to hot wire it.

I am caught.

"Hi, please don't call the cops I'm lost." she looks like around the age to go to college.

"I'm new at campus, and I didn't get to sign in yet and, I," I look down seeming ashamed and tear up, " And, I am out of money so I can't buy an apartment and, I, I must have lost my car to I thought this one was mine."

I put my head in my hands and begin to sob. I have to pull the pity me card great!
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig





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Thu Apr 05, 2018 6:24 pm
Bellarke says...



Spoiler! :
Yeah. And the Thor part, i was gonna do Loki, but then I thought If she loves Loki from childhood, she will know its him. So that might start it up, it being Thor. Could you see the picture though??


Wow is all that I can think as I look at him bawl like my three year old nephew.

I toss the stick away, and look at the boy and think, He's kinda hot.

"Chill. I can help you out. Whats your name?"
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Thu Apr 05, 2018 6:27 pm
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JULIA


I walk down the street, eating a packet of crisps. I've just left the college and am on my way back to my flat.

Something catches my eye.

Oh god. It's that freak Isabelle Reinheart. I am about to turn around and walk away before I spot another person with her. It's nobody I recognise from campus. He has his head in his hands and is crying.

I catch a glimpse of his face. My word..... that is the most handsome man I have ever seen.

I stuff the crisps into my bag and walk over.

"Excuse me," I call. "Are you OK?"



Spoiler! :
Why should Julia hate Isabelle do you think?
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