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Trouble in a Trio



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Sun Dec 07, 2014 11:38 pm
kingofeli says...



pinging @Burrow and @VeerenVKS so that we can discuss what we want to do here
if you guys want we can all write separately but i think it would be fun if we could write together
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im down for anything xp
mostly here for creative guidance though, writing might be scarce on my end >.>
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Mon Dec 08, 2014 12:58 am
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well i was thinking we could plot since i don't really have anything at the ready
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I'm a black, non-binary transgender boy, who is a Christian witch (tentative for now). I'm also a panromantic asexual. I sell poetry; contact me if you're interested in buying poems from me.





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Mon Dec 08, 2014 2:48 am
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How about, three characters, three boys, all brothers, and have some kind of gene that turns them into monsters, and its about them trying to fit in the world or something like that?
“The end of suffering does not justify the suffering, and so there is no end to suffering, what a mess I am, I thought, what a fool, how foolish and narrow, how worthless, how pinched and pathetic, how helpless."

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Mon Dec 08, 2014 2:52 am
veeren says...



wow i forgot to subscribe -_-
monsters sounds cool to me. maybe its like a superhero thing where they try to save people. or hurt them. your call xp
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Mon Dec 08, 2014 2:57 am
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I think save, but they don't let us, they need to learn to trust us, and maybe one of us turns evil, but then the other two turn him good or something, name ideas?
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Mon Dec 08, 2014 3:02 am
veeren says...



eh, good to evil to good sounds cliche, i prefer good to evil to kill him off c;<
and i am terrible with names >.>
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Mon Dec 08, 2014 3:07 am
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Maybe he is evil from the start then he goes good, but actually still bad, then in the end, he really never becomes good, he just asks for forgiveness at the end of the book.

Names:
(just random)
Barry, bob, Garry, Larry, harry, Mary, Zane, Andrew, Connor, Lewis, Jane, Alderson, ........ Jack, My brain is dead, Mason, Marlon,

yep:)

As for the enemy besides the brother, any ideas?
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Mon Dec 08, 2014 4:02 am
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I like the idea that's developing~
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Mon Dec 08, 2014 4:11 am
veeren says...



i like the idea of always being evil, itll trick readers hehehehe
but lets go plot before names.

how do they become monsters exactly
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Mon Dec 08, 2014 7:42 am
Burrow says...



umm something in there genes, that comes to them at the age of 16-21?
“The end of suffering does not justify the suffering, and so there is no end to suffering, what a mess I am, I thought, what a fool, how foolish and narrow, how worthless, how pinched and pathetic, how helpless."

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Mon Dec 08, 2014 5:43 pm
kingofeli says...



VeerenVKS wrote:i like the idea of always being evil, itll trick readers hehehehe
but lets go plot before names.

how do they become monsters exactly


perhaps it could be some kind of an ancient curse?
Feel free to just randomly message me, I get bored easily.

I'm a black, non-binary transgender boy, who is a Christian witch (tentative for now). I'm also a panromantic asexual. I sell poetry; contact me if you're interested in buying poems from me.





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Mon Dec 08, 2014 10:45 pm
Burrow says...



That could work, maybe some spell they read out.
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Mon Dec 08, 2014 11:05 pm
veeren says...



that would add another layer of depth to the story thatd wed need to think out. like what is this magic? where did it come from? is it something everyone knows about or something kept to a specific group?
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Mon Dec 08, 2014 11:19 pm
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good question, maybe a specific group, that were all killed, and the three brothers have to re-start the group?
“The end of suffering does not justify the suffering, and so there is no end to suffering, what a mess I am, I thought, what a fool, how foolish and narrow, how worthless, how pinched and pathetic, how helpless."

~Extremely loud and incredible close








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