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That summer ( FreeFeet, blimeylimey217)



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Tue Sep 09, 2014 12:26 am
happysmilers says...



The story starts with a young girl named Brandi who losses her parents in a car accident. She is taken into Foster care and raised by a nice set of parents. The mom is a Christian, and the dad is a not. Brande and her parents live in Nashville Tennessee. Brande has a set of best friends one named Jason and the other Cindy,the three become unsepriable when Brandies parents wont stop fighting. Soon her parents divore and Brandi goes to live with her mom in California. Her dad becomes a serious alcoholic Brandi leaves Jason and Cindy with the only kinda conection to write since Brandi was never allowed to have her own email. (This all happens to Brandi when she is ten). Brandi loves her dad and has really turned from her mothers beilife in God. Brandi only gets to go up and see her father every now and then but his drinking habit gets worse. One day when Brandie is out driving with her dad they get into a car reck giving Brandies mom full custody over Brandi till she is 18. When at 18 Brandi finally makes the dision to go live with her father for the summer. And the summer she goes to live with her dad will change her life forever...





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Thu Sep 11, 2014 10:43 am
strawberrybeaches217 says...



Name: Jason Cupert

Age: 17

Appearance: Sort of ruggishly handsome. He has a clean-shaven dark beard and hazel eyes, making him look a lot older than he is. He is extremely muscular, although he doesn't totally look like it.

Personality: He is someone everyone likes. He has a big heart that he loves to share with others. He always makes friends with the "outcasts," even though the "populars" love him too. He has been this way since he was little. His parents were rich, and frankly, they didn't leave much time for Jason. He started to become bitter when his nanny told him: "show a great love, it is greater than hate."

Likes/Dislikes: He hates having to deal with the flirtatious girls around. He wants to make them happy, but won't. He loves singing. He is working on signing with a recording company currently. He also hates having a lot of money, even though he lpves living right outside of Nashville, he could do without it to have a loving family.

Other: Jason is slightly lactose intolerant but sometimes he cheats and eats pizza and ice cream. The only one to know his secrets is his best friend, Brandi, but she moved and they haven't talked in quite a long time.
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Thu Sep 18, 2014 1:54 am
happysmilers says...



Brandi, is pretty much a closed book. When she was younger no one ever wanted to be friends with her. Excapt Jason and Chloe. She has been playing the piano since she was five and is a amazing pianist. She wants nothing to do with Jesus. She has always hung out with the bad crowd. Drinking and into some drugs. This all without her mothers aproval. Her heart his for her daddy. Her social skills are not the greatest, but when treated the right way her funny free spirted personality shows forth. She loves her dad even with all the big mstakes he has made.
Deep down inside she scretly searches for fufilment.
She hates wearing shoes, and her secret passion is running in the rain, and going to a college for music! Though she would never admit that since she cant afford college.





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Thu Sep 18, 2014 2:02 am
happysmilers says...



Oh, and she is 18 just graduated out of high school.
(Just a side question? I think Jason should older when she comes up for the summer? Is that all right?)








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