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I will review your poetry! Or short stories.



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Sun Feb 02, 2014 2:34 pm
rhiasofia says...



Hey guys! Really want to do some reviews, so if you have poetry or short stories you would like reviewed, post a link here. I can't promise that I'll be super quick, but I will do it eventually. I will nitpick grammar and structure, vocabulary, and spelling, but I'm not going to give you issues about the subject. So if it's something sensitive where you don't want to hear people tell you that it's such a cliché topic, or unoriginal, or such, I am the girl to review you!
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Sat Mar 01, 2014 8:07 pm
Evander says...



Please review this please!

Addiction

Thank you.
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Sun Mar 02, 2014 12:47 pm
rhiasofia says...



RavenMoonStone wrote:Please review this please!

Addiction

Thank you.



I will get right on that now :)
Your head is a living forest full of song birds
~E. E. Cummings
  





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Sun Mar 16, 2014 1:26 am
FinnWinterfall says...



Please review my poem...
Past, Present, Future
Past, Present, Future
  





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Wed Mar 26, 2014 8:01 pm
rhiasofia says...



@FinnWinterfall, it already has five hefty reviews. Do you still need me to review it, or is there something specific about the poem you'd like me to focus on to further assist you?
Your head is a living forest full of song birds
~E. E. Cummings
  





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Sat Apr 05, 2014 10:37 am
rhiasofia says...



@fiffallns, this is not a writing request. Please do not post things that are not writing to be reviewed here.
Your head is a living forest full of song birds
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Wed Sep 23, 2015 3:22 am
Hippyhoodrat says...



Hi.I'd love it if you could review a poem ive recently written, "boiling." I know your thing is grammar and stuff but I'd really appreciate hearing you opinion on the subject as well. Thanks so much.
  





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Wed Sep 23, 2015 3:30 am
Storygirl95 says...



I would love if you would review the short story I wrote! Don't stress about time, I'm in no hurry. Thanks for your time! :)
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