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Wed Feb 19, 2014 10:05 pm
NerdBird says...



Hi there! Nerd Bird here!
I would greatly appreciate it if you could review the beginning of my first novel The Shifties! :D

You can find the first two chapters here:
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/profile/NerdBird/portfolio/462161

Cant wait to read your feedback!
:)
  





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Tue Mar 04, 2014 3:42 pm
eldEr says...



All that needs to be done up to this point has been done
Guuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurl.

got trans?
  





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Tue Mar 25, 2014 4:03 pm
DrFeelGood says...



Hi Isha! Thanks a lot for reviewing my previous story. I would be glad if you review my short story, 'A Godly Affair'. It has received 5 reviews so far, but most of them are nitpicks on grammar. I request you to tell me about plot, narration and other aspects of the story which I can improve. Thanks!
A Godly Affair
  





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Tue Mar 25, 2014 6:00 pm
guineapiggirl says...



Hello! I'd love it if you could look at my story :)

Deciding to Die

I'm afraid I don't know how to attach a picture of soup...
  





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Tue Mar 25, 2014 9:21 pm
eldEr says...



@guineapiggirl
@Gaurav009

Done and done! :)
Guuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurl.

got trans?
  





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Wed Mar 26, 2014 8:20 pm
rhiasofia says...



Hey Isha, I have a few poems that haven't gotten much attention. I could really use feedback, though. I'll leave you with options and let you pick :)

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The stars, dirt and dark

When the Robins lift

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Godly

Whatever interests you! Thanks.
Your head is a living forest full of song birds
~E. E. Cummings
  





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Thu Mar 27, 2014 3:26 am
eldEr says...



@rhiasofia
Done!
Guuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurl.

got trans?
  





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Thu Mar 27, 2014 2:15 pm
DrFeelGood says...



Hello Isha, thanks a lot for your reviews. I have written the first chaper of my novel, which is an adaptation of my first short story (which you had review). I am facing some grammar issues and haven't got any review. I would also like to know whether I should continue writing it. And something about the plot. Hope you have a look at it.
The Perfect Thief (Working title) Chapter 1
  





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Fri Apr 04, 2014 4:33 pm
dancingwatermelon says...



Hi! Do you think you could possibly review my Introishthing to my novel? It's pretty short, but it's my first story, so I'd really like some feedback.

The House of Sand-- Introduction
Here it is, if you feel so inclined as to review it for me.

I should be posting the next bit later today.
  








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