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Mon Feb 24, 2014 1:11 am
rawrafied
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I would be most indebted if you could review this:
Salvation of Ignorance - Chapter 1: Yes, A Charming Man, Indeed.
The exact year is 1802.
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Reviews: 308
Mon Feb 24, 2014 7:51 pm
GoldFlame
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Hey,
@rawrafied
! Review Day's stolen most of my juice, but I'll get to you pronto.
Last edited by
GoldFlame
on Tue Feb 25, 2014 4:31 am, edited 1 time in total.
“He leant tensely against the wall and frowned like a man trying to unbend a corkscrew by telekinesis.” – Douglas Adams
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Points: 12486
Reviews: 111
Tue Feb 25, 2014 3:46 am
rawrafied
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Completely understandable. No rush. Work at your leisure. ^_^
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Tue Feb 25, 2014 4:31 am
GoldFlame
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Completed! Great piece.
Last edited by
GoldFlame
on Mon Oct 13, 2014 2:13 am, edited 1 time in total.
“He leant tensely against the wall and frowned like a man trying to unbend a corkscrew by telekinesis.” – Douglas Adams
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Points: 830
Reviews: 208
Tue Feb 25, 2014 10:17 pm
rhiasofia
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l'd love to have one of these two reviewed. Whichever intrigues you the most. They're both poems.
My Heart a Goldfinch
My Heart a Goldfinch
Let the World Stay Dark
Let the World Stay Dark
Thanks!
Your head is a living forest full of song birds
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E. E. Cummings
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Points: 2421
Reviews: 122
Tue Feb 25, 2014 10:42 pm
Purple
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http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=109026
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=108969
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=108972
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=108863
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=108864
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Reviews: 121
Wed Feb 26, 2014 3:20 pm
WritingWolf
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Could I get a review on
Horton's Egg
please?
~You can only grasp what you reach for~
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Reviews: 308
Fri Feb 28, 2014 4:11 am
GoldFlame
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Alright, it's been a while, but...
All completed!
“He leant tensely against the wall and frowned like a man trying to unbend a corkscrew by telekinesis.” – Douglas Adams
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Reviews: 308
Wed Mar 12, 2014 10:29 am
GoldFlame
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Hello? Hello?
Last edited by
GoldFlame
on Fri Mar 14, 2014 3:31 am, edited 2 times in total.
“He leant tensely against the wall and frowned like a man trying to unbend a corkscrew by telekinesis.” – Douglas Adams
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Thu Mar 13, 2014 9:14 am
DrFeelGood
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Hi goldflame, I have written a short story which has some grammatical mistakes and I am not able to rectify them. I request you to help me with it and may be give your opinion. Thanks!
A Godly Affair
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Reviews: 44
Thu Mar 13, 2014 10:48 pm
NerdBird
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Would love it if you could review my short story
Zom-Brawl
Gold!
Really appreciate your feedback!
And its a short story one-off this time!
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Reviews: 12
Sun Mar 16, 2014 1:24 am
FinnWinterfall
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Pretty please review my poem...
Past, Present, Future
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Reviews: 9
Sun Mar 16, 2014 2:20 am
wordsy
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Hi there! I've just joined this site today and I already like the friendly atmosphere!
I would greatly appreciate a review on my piece:
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=109537
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Thank you so much!
"We're all stories in the end."
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Mon Mar 17, 2014 7:22 pm
GoldFlame
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All completed!
Last edited by
GoldFlame
on Wed Mar 19, 2014 12:05 am, edited 1 time in total.
“He leant tensely against the wall and frowned like a man trying to unbend a corkscrew by telekinesis.” – Douglas Adams
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Tue Mar 18, 2014 5:49 am
Laure
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Evening
I would appreciate your review on this very much!
Laure's linguistic liquorice shop of reviews
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