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Sat Apr 19, 2014 5:04 pm
GoldFlame says...



All completed!
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Sat Apr 26, 2014 1:27 am
DrFeelGood says...



Hi Goldflame! I have updated my story
The Perfect Thief Chapter 2 Waiting for your awesome review.

Thanks.
  





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Sun Apr 27, 2014 3:52 am
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Feel free to bombard me, y'all. It's Review Day, and me team's behind! :D
Last edited by GoldFlame on Sun Apr 27, 2014 10:28 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Sun Apr 27, 2014 8:41 am
gauravkundu32 says...



Please review this Diakrino- The darkness within (Chapter 3)
Thank you :)
Always Hope for the BEST
  





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Tue Apr 29, 2014 3:30 am
GoldFlame says...



Sorry, forgot to post that it's completed.
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Wed Apr 30, 2014 2:51 pm
ulala8 says...



The Tales of the Argonauts: The Osorezu and the Hana (Chapter 1-1)
Every chapter needs reviews after chapter one (preferably 4-6)
  





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Wed Apr 30, 2014 5:19 pm
Benrobertringrose says...



Hi there,

Would really appreciate a review on this piece:

The Long Weekend: Part 1.

Thanks so much in advance!

Ben
  





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Wed Apr 30, 2014 11:30 pm
DudeMcGuy says...



Hi Goldflame,

Here is the chapter I told you about. It's split into two parts because it's too long otherwise (and x2 review points for you :) ).

The Roads of Marceris Ch.9 (1/2)
The Roads of Marceris Ch.9 (2/2)

I typed up a quick summary of the story up to that point. Hopefully it helps out a bit. Whenever you have time is fine.

Thanks in advance,
-Dude
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Mon Jun 23, 2014 5:22 am
GoldFlame says...



Gosh, it's been ages. I completed Ben's and Dude's, and Ulala's should come.
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Sun Jul 06, 2014 4:16 am
TheProviant says...



Hello! Can you review my work? It will be greatly appreciated!
Machiavelli's "The Art Of War" - an essay on it.
  








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