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i just submitted part III as well @Lucrezia, i hate to inundate you with requests but it's all part of the same story and it'd be nice if you could review it in its totality. this is the last part:

Arthur's Showdown, Part III

thanks so much.

@horrendous, reviewed part two!

I'll do part three in a bit.

Dude! I have a novel up, and it's quite a few chapters long, so it's totally up to you if you want to read the whole thing, read and review all the parts, or just skip right to the very end (it'll make a lot more sense if you at least read the whole thing, but like I said, there's quite a bit up there, so no pressure to do so )

Coffee, Grit, and my Dad's Best Shoes 2.2

That's the link to the latest bit that I posted. If you want previous bits, they're all under "related works" on the side Thanks so much!

@Isha, sure thing! Though I might wait and review the whole thing on Review Day...

hey, the next part of Eater of Dimensions is up. could you spare some review?

Eater of Dimensions, Part II

@horrendous, I'll do that as soon as I get back from vacation.

You got your fourth star!

@pony123, now I have. XD I'm working on my fifth star at the moment. Guess I should change the name of this thread lol.

Hey, Lucrezia, not sure how comfortable you are with romance stuff but I'd love it if you could take a look at Holly, The List, and the End of the World: Chapter 1. I'm not looking for much in the way of grammatical errors because I'm sure there's loads but character criticism and plot stuff is desperately needed. The other two chapters are up too if you feel like being especially ambitious. Thanks

@cha3739, I'm on it!

Hey! Could you review this for me? It's the first chapter of my novel

The Good Life

@lakegirls, sure thing!

Thank-you!

Hey Team leader!
Got something for you! Warm as ice: Chapter 1, Illiete.

@AlexSushiDog, thanks! I'm having some computer troubles, but once my laptop quits acting weird, I'll get right on that.