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Tue Jan 14, 2014 12:15 am

TriSARAHtops says...

So, you want something reviewed? Well, fancy that, because I want to REVIEW!

Post the links to the work you would like me to review below. I'm afraid that I only review short stories and chapters. Early chapters only, please don't expect me to review your chapter 22, but I will happily read your first couple of chapters if you want chapter three reviewed.

I don't review poetry.

Any genre is accepted, but I reserve the right not to review if I find anything too hard-going or offensive.

If you request a review and I have not done so in a month, please send me a PM to remind me, because I've probably forgotten / been swamped by school work. If another month passes and still nothing, you are welcome to pester me as much as you like.

I'll post here when I'm done reviewing a piece, so please don't request a review if I'm drowning in requests.

If you want feedback on a specific aspect of your writing (flow, voice, characters, plot etc) please let me know, and I'll provide specific feedback.

Aside from that, I look forward to reading your work!

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Fri Jan 17, 2014 2:22 am

deleted30 says...

Hiya!

I don't have anything specific in mind, but you're welcome to take a crack at anything in my portfolio. profile/Lucrezia/portfolio/461419

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Fri Jan 17, 2014 4:40 am

TriSARAHtops says...

@Lucrezia I reviewed Camp Tiburon (did I spell it right) because it had the least reviews. If you want something else down, give me a shout.

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Fri Jan 17, 2014 4:50 am

deleted30 says...

Yep, you spelled it right (it's Spanish for shark, I believe). Thanks! :smt003

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Wed Feb 05, 2014 2:34 am

lakegirls says...

Hey! Could you review this for me?

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Thu Feb 06, 2014 9:03 am

LordGreenleaf says...

Hi, could you review my poem?

[url]http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=108397][/url]

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Fri Feb 07, 2014 7:25 am

TriSARAHtops says...

@lakegirls Done!
@LordGreenleaf I'm sorry but I don't review poetry. If you'd really like a review, I'll do it, but I can't guarantee how much help I'll be.

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Fri Feb 07, 2014 9:21 pm

deleted5 says...

Hey Sarah!
There is a prologue but it's not nessercary to read:
Warm as ice: Chapter 1, Illiete.

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Fri Feb 07, 2014 10:59 pm

TriSARAHtops says...

Done! Next please!

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Mon Feb 10, 2014 4:32 am

Mirfain26 says...

Hello! I was wondering if you'd like to review http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=108465 (Did I link it right? Apologies, I'm quite new here)