Hello, Laure. Could you please review on my narrative/mystery novel? I've only posted the first chapter though-- I'm so insecure of posting the rest. A few reviewers have helped me out a lot, and even after I've fixed it up, i still feel as though it needs some repairing. So please check it out : http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=110735 Thank you.
Hi Laure! Would you mind taking a look at a chapter of mine? It is the second chapter, but you have reviewed the first when I origianlly published it, and I feel like I need some more feedback on it, especially plotwise. Be as harsh as you like! Thank you!
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