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Sun Apr 27, 2014 1:19 pm
Laure says...



@Pompadour, I swear to god. I will get part two done ASAP.
  





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Fri May 02, 2014 6:07 am
Glauke says...



I would be so grateful if you could take a look at one or both of my newest poems:

Untitled No. 1
absolution

Any feedback would be greatly appreciated. :)

Thanks so much!
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be still, sad heart, and cease repining
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Fri May 02, 2014 11:34 am
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@penprincess, I'd love to, before I do. Any specific areas you wish that I specifically look for? Plot? Grammar? Character development?
  





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Fri May 02, 2014 8:27 pm
Glauke says...



An overall review would be fantastic. :)
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Sat May 03, 2014 12:21 pm
Laure says...



@penprincess.

Is TOTORO! <3333333333333

Reviews completed, sorry I couldn't say much. :(
  





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Sat May 03, 2014 2:02 pm
Glauke says...



That's totally alright! Thanks so much for your feedback.

If you ever need anything reviewed, let me know :)
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Tue May 06, 2014 1:30 am
Brunnera says...



Hello, Laure. Could you please review on my narrative/mystery novel? I've only posted the first chapter though-- I'm so insecure of posting the rest. A few reviewers have helped me out a lot, and even after I've fixed it up, i still feel as though it needs some repairing. :(
So please check it out : http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=110735
Thank you. :D
  





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Wed May 28, 2014 8:26 am
Laure says...



O_O I thought I had reviewed that, but I didn't! @Brunnera. I am so so so sorry, do you still want it reviewed or any other works of yours?
  





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xD Oh it's okay, I'm not offended at all! :D Really its up to you whether you would like to or not. I'm okay with it. :)
  





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Fri May 30, 2014 7:34 am
TriSARAHtops says...



Hi Laure! Would you mind taking a look at a chapter of mine? It is the second chapter, but you have reviewed the first when I origianlly published it, and I feel like I need some more feedback on it, especially plotwise. Be as harsh as you like! Thank you!
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Sun Jun 15, 2014 8:38 pm
ire123 says...



Could you review the first chapter of my story Unexpected happenings?
  





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Mon Jun 16, 2014 9:59 am
Laure says...



@ire123, could you link it?
  





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Mon Jun 16, 2014 11:58 am
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@TriSARAHtops, finished. Though that review was crappy as.
  





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