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Mon Jan 06, 2014 3:35 pm
Lauren2010 says...



Welcome, welcome!

I see you have come to view my wares, well let me tell you a bit about the services I confidently offer to all my pretty customers:
Fiction of any sort
Novels, especially
Fantasy and Sci Fi are my particular forte

I also enjoy a good script,
Article, or essay


Now, if you would step this way, I may explain to you the services I offer just as eagerly, though my skill in such is less refined:
Poetry of most kinds
Though I am not a poet by trade
I will do my best


Before you go please let me share the services that I strictly do not offer, due to hilariously poor experience and lack of knowledge or strong moral opposition:
Lyrics
Fanfiction that I am unfamiliar with
And subject matters deemed offensive (hate crimes, severe and intentional racism, sexism, etc)


Deposit your requests in the box below and I will begin work as soon as I am capable, barring unexpected complications irl. In the event of an overwhelming amount of requests (5+) I reserve the right to direct you toward an equally capable and helpful reviewer who might be able to serve you in proper time. Thank you!
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Tue Jan 07, 2014 2:25 pm
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Twit says...



Hi Lauren!

Could you take a look at Grey Heart - 1 please, being as harsh as possible? Thank you!
"TV makes sense. It has logic, structure, rules, and likeable leading men. In life, we have this."


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Tue Jan 07, 2014 3:22 pm
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Lauren2010 says...



@Twit - I most definitely will!

Unfortunately I didn't consider the fact when setting up this thread yesterday that I will be leaving the country today for a week. >.< I may find some downtime to do some reviews, but I will definitely dole out any reviews requested asap when I've returned! (That goes for everybody.) Hope that's alright <3
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Tue Jan 07, 2014 3:55 pm
Twit says...



That's fine! Hope you have a good time! :D
"TV makes sense. It has logic, structure, rules, and likeable leading men. In life, we have this."


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Fri Jan 31, 2014 10:52 pm
Twit says...



Hey again! Could you take a shred at Grey Heart - 2 and Grey Heart – 3 please?
"TV makes sense. It has logic, structure, rules, and likeable leading men. In life, we have this."


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Wed Apr 30, 2014 8:26 am
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Last edited by fight4whatisright on Fri Sep 18, 2015 5:07 am, edited 1 time in total.
  





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Thu May 01, 2014 3:58 am
Glauke says...



Hi :)

I would really appreciate it if you took a look at either or both of my new poems:

Untitled No. 1

absolution

Thanks so much :)
❁❁❁

be still, sad heart, and cease repining
behind the clouds is the sun still shining
  





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Sun May 25, 2014 7:10 pm
Lauren2010 says...



Sorry for getting to it so late, but @penprincess I'm getting to your poems right now!

And @fight4whatisright I will gladly work on your novel! Will likely take me some time to get through, though so patience is appreciated. ;)
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Wed May 28, 2014 1:54 am
Crimsona says...



Hi there, if you have the time please could you review my short story?

Every cell in our entire body is replaced every seven years

Thank you!
Avatar (c) to Thalia - A great friend of mine
  





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Sun Jun 15, 2014 8:41 pm
ire123 says...



Can you review the first chapter of my story Unexpected happening?
  








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