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Mon Dec 30, 2013 6:40 am
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JohnLocke1 says...



Anything that you want an opinion on, any length or genre, I will give you a concise and comprehensive review.
"To prejudge other men's notions before we have looked into them is not to show their darkness but to put out our own eyes." - John Locke
  





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Thu Jan 02, 2014 4:27 am
Acward says...



This is my very first post, so please and thank you! I will try to review something of yours in return.

The Story of Liam - Chapter 1
  





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Thu Jan 02, 2014 5:21 am
JohnLocke1 says...



I have your review finished! Nice story, my friend. And I do love your avatar. As I love Avatar.
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Thu Jan 02, 2014 10:04 pm
GoldFlame says...



I'll review one of your works if you review Invisible Echo. Don't be afraid to be harsh or overly detailed :D!
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Fri Jan 03, 2014 5:00 am
JohnLocke1 says...



Your review is complete, my friend! Really, a great piece.
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Fri Jan 03, 2014 6:51 pm
Twit says...



Hey!

I'd be very grateful if you could review Grey Heart - 1 Please be as harsh as possible. :)
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Fri Jan 03, 2014 10:42 pm
JohnLocke1 says...



Your review is up, my friend! I can see that we both have a love of magicians...
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Sat Jan 04, 2014 11:30 am
Ravenboy says...



I've just posted the first chapter of my new fantasy novel - Paralleled, I would really appreciate it if you can review it. Feel free to be harsh, I want honest opinions.

Thanks!
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Sat Jan 04, 2014 6:48 pm
defiantAuthoress says...



I would love if you would review the introduction to my Doctor Who fanfiction: Scribbling Galaxies . Thank you so much!
  





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Sun Jan 05, 2014 5:43 am
JohnLocke1 says...



@Ravenboy , your review is complete! Great story, my friend.
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Sun Jan 05, 2014 5:44 am
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@defiantAuthoress , your review is complete! I do not read fan-fiction, so this was an interesting review for me. Thank you for sharing that, my friend.
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Mon Jan 06, 2014 11:00 am
Pompadour says...



Hey! I'd appreciate it if you left a review on this: Meet me by the starry seacove, and I'll show you how to die
Thanks! :D
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Mon Jan 06, 2014 11:27 am
Laure says...



Hello! I'd really appreciate it if you can review the first chapter of my novel.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=107403

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Tue Jan 07, 2014 4:35 am
JohnLocke1 says...



@Pompadour, your review is complete! You have lovely writing, my friend!
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Wed Jan 08, 2014 5:28 am
JohnLocke1 says...



@Laure, your review is complete! Fantastic story, my friend. Fantastic.
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