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Sat Sep 06, 2014 8:59 pm
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Cithara says...



Might as well give you something to review ^^
ok you review almost all of my works, but I really wanna see what you have to say about this
Ode to Braces
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Sat Sep 06, 2014 9:00 pm
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TimmyJake says...



Will get to it soon, @TheWriter13!!! *yes, I should be online*
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Sun Sep 07, 2014 2:06 am
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Dooone! Who's next? :D
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Sun Sep 07, 2014 3:40 pm
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Evander says...



Misused and Abused (1)

I wrote this when I was... nine or so. This is Harry Potter fanfiction and the grammar is terrible. (Though, I don't want the review to say I should edit this. Because, I'm not going back to edit it. :D I would rather not taint the work with older, more experienced me.) I can review something of yours in exchange!
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Thu Sep 11, 2014 10:08 pm
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TakeThatYouFiend says...



Sweet Tunes Like
And here's some lyrics to read (and *like* he added unscrupulously)
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Fri Sep 12, 2014 1:55 pm
TimmyJake says...



Both Completed! Who's next?
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Fri Sep 12, 2014 11:34 pm
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ulala8 says...



Hey, I have a chapter of my novel that only has one review and has been in the green room for a month now.

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Sun Sep 14, 2014 9:20 am
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SpeedyPencil says...



Hi I have a short story I'd love for you to review here: Queen Bee- any critique welcome
Scissors cuts paper, paper covers rock, rock crushes lizard, lizard poisons Spock, Spock smashes scissors, scissors decapitates lizard, lizard eats paper, paper disproves Spock, Spock vaporizes rock, and as it always has, rock crushes scissors.
  





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Sun Sep 14, 2014 10:24 pm
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All done! Who's next?
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Wed Jan 07, 2015 3:31 pm
TimmyJake says...



Still open for requestsssss....
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Wed Jan 07, 2015 10:55 pm
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mephistophelesangel says...



Hello!

Um, I would love it if you could review a short story of mine... It's kind of lengthy, but... I would love some feedback on it.

No World for Villains

Yep, there's the link. I'm really wondering if the plot makes sense to people or not... It made complete sense inside my head, but I am really curious (terrified) to see if people can understand what just happened there.

I would also love it if you could touch upon the tone of the story, the character development, and how it made you feel reading it (what you think about how the overall story turned out).

Is that too much?? :( If it is, I'm so sorry, I don't mind if you just do what you want to do...

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Wed Jan 07, 2015 11:27 pm
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TimmyJake says...



@mephistophelesangel, I love doing reviews how you want. When reviewing it, I'll keep your concerns in mind.

Expect it within a day or so! :)
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Sun Jan 11, 2015 6:04 pm
Poseidon says...



Hey Timmy can you review my work. Its caled Candy Land chapter 3.
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Sun Jan 11, 2015 6:08 pm
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Poseidon says...



Heres a link: Candyland Chapter 3
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Sun Jan 11, 2015 7:34 pm
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I'd be happy to, @Poseidon! I think I may even have time for it today. Expect it within a day or so. c:
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