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Wed Dec 25, 2013 2:55 pm
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TimmyJake says...



Timmyjake here,

Reviewing, quite honestly, is all that I do on YWS. Everything else is an occasional distraction. I love reviewing any genre - yes, even extremely dramatic pieces, or fanfiction (I love 'em all) - and will leave you a shiny review if you ask for one.

I can do many forms of reviews. If you ask for a break-down of every issue the piece could possibly have - I will deliver to the best of my ability. I can give you a review based only on plot and characters, to give you an idea of what you want to work on there. If you ask for merely a short review. Well, I can do those too. So in your post, be sure to note what kind of review you want. Trust me, it makes a difference. Both for you and for me.

So let's get this thing going! I love reviewing, and I love reading. Sooo... that is why I review at least twice a day. So give me your pieces. It won't be long. I can give you your review in less than a day - most of the time. Others will take a while longer. :)

Before we get going, please remember and take into consideration that I can refuse to review your work. There are several reason why I may refuse, but mature content(16+) is probably the biggest. I dun do that.

Thanks! Let the requests begin.
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Fri Dec 27, 2013 6:02 pm
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KnightTeen says...



Timmy, have a go at anything and everything in my portfolio.

And it works both ways. You want me to review something, post on my wall or shoot a PM.
Screw Yolo. I'm a cat. Nine lives losers!

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Fri Dec 27, 2013 6:11 pm
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Ok! Will do. Expect a review on something within the next day or so!! If you want, you could review the work below. Its in my signature... :D

Fifteen minutes later... Review has been made!
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Mon Jan 13, 2014 1:12 pm
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Pompadour says...



I NEED REVIEW!
I desperately need feedback on this chapter:
Hawk's eye - Chapter One (Working title)
I don't care if it's the harshest of critiques telling me I'm the worst amateur writer on the surface of the earth, but I can't move on until I've had all the faults listed and corrected.
Thanks a bunch! :D
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Mon Jan 13, 2014 9:00 pm
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Will work on it! Give me a little bit of time, but I will get it done for you! :D
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Wed Apr 30, 2014 11:44 am
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DrFeelGood says...



Hi timmyjake. Could you review anything from my portfolio?
  





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Thu May 01, 2014 3:59 am
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Thu May 01, 2014 1:15 pm
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TimmyJake says...



On it! Will get to them within a few days...
Be patient! But they will be done. :)
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Thu May 01, 2014 7:38 pm
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Spotswood says...



Maybe you would be interested in this Random, Possibly Cliched, but then Again, Possibly Original, High Fantasy Epic Prologue (with the pointless love poem since removed)
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Fri May 02, 2014 12:19 am
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dreamingofwonderland says...



Hi! Would you be interested in reviewing the first two parts of the novel I'm working on? They are the only ones in my portfolio!
Would you like me to review anything of yours?
Thanks!
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Wed Aug 27, 2014 1:43 pm
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Alllllll done! Who is next?
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Thu Aug 28, 2014 9:18 am
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Dracula says...



The Story of Monoceros

I just edited this based on two reviews. Could you please review my edit and tell me about anything else that should be changed?
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Thu Aug 28, 2014 2:12 pm
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Done. Who is next?
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Fri Aug 29, 2014 10:55 pm
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Sat Aug 30, 2014 2:20 pm
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Done! Who's next?
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