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Fri Feb 06, 2015 11:20 pm
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Mea says...



Hi Timmy! Can you review this for me? I got a couple of okay reviews, but I'd like one more in depth.

As The World Falls
We're all stories in the end.

I think of you as a fairy with a green dress and a flower crown and stuff.
-EternalRain

I think you, @Deanie and I are like the Three Book Nerd Musketeers of YWS.
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Sat Feb 07, 2015 5:15 pm
TimmyJake says...



@meandbooks and @haven235, it will be a few days - perhaps even up to a week as I have been lazy lately, and am struggling to catch back up. But don't worry! I'll get to you as soon as possible. c:
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Sat Feb 07, 2015 5:23 pm
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Mea says...



Okay. :) Take all the time you need.
We're all stories in the end.

I think of you as a fairy with a green dress and a flower crown and stuff.
-EternalRain

I think you, @Deanie and I are like the Three Book Nerd Musketeers of YWS.
-bluewaterlily
  





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Thu Feb 12, 2015 8:32 am
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ShakespeareWallah says...



Hey Timmy!

Could you review this for me? I'd like a complete break down of every issue kind of review, if that's okay with you.

Thanks!

The Whale Tells the New Girl to Bring Out a Job Circular
  





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Thu Feb 19, 2015 3:17 am
TimmyJake says...



I'm sorry, @unconsoled. My YWS time has been very very much decreased, so I'm not sure if I can get to it, but I'll do my best. :)
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Mon Apr 06, 2015 5:30 am
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FireBird99 says...



You can review my stuff anytime you want to =). It always needs some work. It can be a day, it can be a week, even a month or year until you do it. It doesn't matter.

o.o Maybe I shouldn't have said that. You might not get to it =P
One good thing about music, when it hits you, you feel no pain.

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Fri Apr 10, 2015 10:55 pm
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rainforest says...



Please review.
The Summoning: Chapter 3
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Sat Apr 11, 2015 8:45 pm
haven235 says...



Tied

9/2/05

Gots a twofer fer ya. They be songs though. Thankee.
  





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Sat Jan 16, 2016 9:23 am
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Lightsong says...



Please review Ruby of Revenge [Part 1]! It's part one of the short story. :D
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The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

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Tue Mar 29, 2016 5:32 pm
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RubyRed says...



Hey, Timmy. Would you be so kind as to review my novel chap. for me? The Heart of a Warrior ch. 1 Thanks so much! :D
You can't blame the writer for what the characters say.
— Truman Capote

Review link below!
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Sun Apr 03, 2016 1:44 am
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yizhongt says...



Hey there, could you please review

Starlight: Prologue

Thanks in advance !
  





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Tue Apr 05, 2016 3:45 am
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TimmyJake says...



I'll do my best! Not on YWS as much as I used to, but I'll try. :)
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Tue Apr 05, 2016 1:39 pm
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Glauke says...



Hey, I'd love a detailed review of my newest poem. Feel free to nitpick if you want - just review it however you feel is best (you're the expert) :)

Thanks in advance!

An Ocean Death Would Be So Beautiful
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be still, sad heart, and cease repining
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