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Sun Jan 11, 2015 11:14 pm
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Poseidon says...



Ok thanks
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Fri Jan 16, 2015 10:09 am
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DrFeelGood says...



Hey Timmy, I need your review for my short An Immobile Relationship

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Fri Jan 16, 2015 10:35 am
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Kanome says...



Angel Tears - Prologue
PROTECTOR OF LIGHT
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Fri Jan 16, 2015 2:30 pm
TimmyJake says...



Expect those reviews within a few days or so! Perhaps even within a day. As fast as I can review. xD

@Kanome @Doctorfeelgood
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Sun Jan 18, 2015 2:04 am
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mephistophelesangel says...



Hello! (Again!)

So, I feel so bad about this, but your review was really, really awesome, so...
I just wrote a new short story, The Thirteenth Month. It's rated 16+, but no mature content, not really, I think... It deals with suicide, so I thought I should rate it 16+ (no cussing or sexual content).

If you could review that story, I would love it if you could focus on these things; tone of the story, character development, what you thought about how the story was formatted, and the feeling that the overall story gave to you. Again, if that is too much, you can do whatever you feel is necessary. :)

Link : The Thirteenth Month

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Sun Jan 18, 2015 2:20 am
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TimmyJake says...



@mephistophelesangel, as long as you give me a few days to catch up, giving me more than one request is finee! Thank you for your compliments. c: I try hard.

Expect the review within a day or so - hopefully tonight.
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Sun Jan 18, 2015 2:59 pm
TimmyJake says...



Aaaaall done and ready for next review!
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Mon Jan 26, 2015 7:38 pm
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Stormcrow says...



Hi there! Ive got a few chapters o a novel posted, but everything but the last chapter (Chapter 22 of The Token) has been reviewed, but you can look at whatever you like! I don't mind! :D :pirate3: :smt003
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Fri Jan 30, 2015 3:27 pm
TimmyJake says...



Sorry for the delay, @Stormcrow. I forgot I had a review request and just now remembered.

Expect it within a day or so!
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Sat Jan 31, 2015 5:03 am
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Clickduncake says...



I'd love a review for To: Therapist From: Werewolf. I hope you like it :3
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Thu Feb 05, 2015 8:57 pm
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steward says...



Hi Timmy, I need someone to bash this before it goes through publishing. :)
Sophie

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Thu Feb 05, 2015 9:20 pm
TimmyJake says...



Hey, @steward. I want to make sure that you're correct in what you want from me. A critique-critique review? If you want, since it seems you have gotten lots of positive feedback, I can skip saying anything nice except perhaps a sentence or so telling you I do like the piece, and just spend all of my time there showing you what you can do to make the piece better.

My review for you is completely flexible. Whatever you want.
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Fri Feb 06, 2015 4:01 am
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steward says...



@TimmyJake yes please., I really need critique-critique., skip the blah if you want., thank you! :) oh, and this work had to be 450 words or less., just thought that might shake the review up a bit :D
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