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Stormsie's Story Corner



How are my reviews? I respect honesty!

Storm gave me useful and easy to understand reviews which help me to improve my writings. I was greatly satisfied.
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Storm's feedback was helpful, but felt a little lacking. I was satisfied.
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Storm did not give a quality critique that aided my work. I was disappointed.
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Stormsie is the bomb diggety.
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75%
 
Total votes : 8


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Points: 4731
Reviews: 70
Sat Oct 19, 2013 6:30 pm
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AfterTheStorm says...



Stormsie's Story Corner


Once upon a time there was a YWS user named Storm. She was very bad at remembering to review, so she decided to pick out a nice little corner of YWS dedicated to creating quality critiques. And thus, "Stormsie's Story Corner" was born!


Need some feedback? Comment below with the name of your published work and its URL, and I'll get to it as soon as possible because I'm desperate. Oh, and I don't mind if you leave a little tip for me. ;) Heh.

There are no requirements that your work has to meet, so get to posting!
"And after the storm..." ~Mumford and Sons

You can't have a rainbow without a little rain.

Got Squills?
Proverbs 31:25

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Made you look.
  





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Mon Nov 04, 2013 10:21 pm
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AGWilliams says...



Carnival of Monsters
I'd love a review on my new short story :)

And maybe a couple of comments on the same story on my blog site, if you have time?
http://theagwilliams.webs.com/sample
  





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Thu Nov 14, 2013 1:38 am
AfterTheStorm says...



I'm getting to it right now, @AGWilliams! Apologies for the delay, but my computer was broken. x( Ugh. Anyways... *zips away to review*
"And after the storm..." ~Mumford and Sons

You can't have a rainbow without a little rain.

Got Squills?
Proverbs 31:25

Spoiler! :
Made you look.
  





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Sun Dec 01, 2013 10:12 pm
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TheNeoAceofAll says...



would really appreciate a review of my prologue (and potentially my first chapter). It is entitled The Necromancer. Many thanks!

The Necromancer: Prologue
  





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Sun Dec 08, 2013 7:50 pm
AfterTheStorm says...



I'm getting to it right now!
"And after the storm..." ~Mumford and Sons

You can't have a rainbow without a little rain.

Got Squills?
Proverbs 31:25

Spoiler! :
Made you look.
  





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Points: 4731
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Fri Dec 13, 2013 12:51 am
AfterTheStorm says...



Who's up next?
"And after the storm..." ~Mumford and Sons

You can't have a rainbow without a little rain.

Got Squills?
Proverbs 31:25

Spoiler! :
Made you look.
  





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Sat Dec 14, 2013 7:45 pm
AfterTheStorm says...



Hey, @ShortBus! I'll get to your chapter ASAP, but I must warn you that my computer isn't working properly. (I'm using my phone currently.) This being said, once everything is fixed I'll review!!! :D Thanks!
"And after the storm..." ~Mumford and Sons

You can't have a rainbow without a little rain.

Got Squills?
Proverbs 31:25

Spoiler! :
Made you look.
  





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Tue Dec 17, 2013 10:08 am
Snowery says...



Hi! Can you review my short story? The Keys to Silence Are Black and White
Thanks :)
The World Is Mine.
  





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Tue Dec 17, 2013 11:04 am
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AfterTheStorm says...



Alright, Silverlock! It'd be my pleasure.
"And after the storm..." ~Mumford and Sons

You can't have a rainbow without a little rain.

Got Squills?
Proverbs 31:25

Spoiler! :
Made you look.
  





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Tue Dec 17, 2013 10:32 pm
RLK says...



Hey AfterTheStorm
could you review my short story Elijah? Elijah
  





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Tue Dec 17, 2013 10:57 pm
AfterTheStorm says...



I'll get to it!
"And after the storm..." ~Mumford and Sons

You can't have a rainbow without a little rain.

Got Squills?
Proverbs 31:25

Spoiler! :
Made you look.
  





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Wed Dec 18, 2013 10:04 am
Pompadour says...



Hey. :D Could you please leave a review on my short story "Show me the colours of the world"?

Here's the link: Show me the colours of the world

Thanks so much!
How to format poetry on YWS

this sky where we live is no place to lose your wings
  





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Wed Dec 18, 2013 5:23 pm
Tenyo says...



Do you like fantasy?

Nicaro's Lesser Being Chapter 3 is in need of a review. It's pretty good, but I'm rubbish at reviewing this kind of stuff.

What is the... um... recommended tippage in these parts?
We were born to be amazing.
  








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