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Mon Dec 11, 2017 1:42 pm
Lightsong says...



Hey, I'm back! Please review Chapter 12.1: Aleveri! Thanks. :D
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

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Mon Dec 11, 2017 2:20 pm
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Oh, right, I forgot all about this thread. Well, I guess I'll go read that!
  





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Wed Dec 13, 2017 10:25 am
shima says...



Title:Exit Monologue (for a situationship)
Genre:Narrative, dramating
Content Rating: 18+ for language
Link: Exit monologue (for a situationship)
Specific concerns? Not really. Mostly about the general feeling this story gives, about how clear it is what the characters want and who they are, whether or not it is dramatic enough. :-)
  








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