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Sat Sep 13, 2014 2:12 am
Rook says...



Done! Bring on the requests! I want moaaar!
Instead, he said, Brother! I know your hunger.
To this, the Wolf answered, Lo!

-Elena Passarello, Animals Strike Curious Poses
  





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Sat Sep 13, 2014 4:10 pm
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Noelle says...



*gives fort moaaaar*

This is the second "real" poem I've ever written (I'm just now learning the inside outs of poetry) so any advice you can give me would be awesome! It needs much work :3

Trapped Along the Way
Noelle is the name, reviewing and writing cliffhangers is the game.

Writer of fantasy, action/adventure, and magic. Huzzah!

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Fri Oct 17, 2014 2:51 am
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bluewaterlily says...



Hi Fortris, if you're not busy and still taking reviews could you review a new poem I posted? Here's the link Monument Thanks!
"A poet is, before anything else, a person who is passionately in love with language." - W.H. Auden
  





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Sat Oct 18, 2014 1:30 am
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Rook says...



Done!
Anyone else? Can't get my first blue star without poems to nom!
Instead, he said, Brother! I know your hunger.
To this, the Wolf answered, Lo!

-Elena Passarello, Animals Strike Curious Poses
  





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Tue Nov 11, 2014 2:40 pm
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TimmyJake says...



Heyyyy, Is.

I know this isn't exactly poetry, but I really need help with it and you're a poetry expert. Do you review song lyrics? If so, link is below. If not, just skip over this request. ^.^

A Moment With You

Thank youuuuu
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Tue Nov 11, 2014 6:09 pm
Rook says...



Yes I do review Lyrics. ^-^
I'm on it, @TimmyJake!
Instead, he said, Brother! I know your hunger.
To this, the Wolf answered, Lo!

-Elena Passarello, Animals Strike Curious Poses
  





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Sat Jan 31, 2015 2:08 pm
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Mea says...



Can I beg a review off you? This is my first attempt at poetry in years.


A New Year's Contradiction

Thanks!
We're all stories in the end.

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Sat Feb 14, 2015 9:02 pm
Rook says...



Finished! Anyone else? :D
Instead, he said, Brother! I know your hunger.
To this, the Wolf answered, Lo!

-Elena Passarello, Animals Strike Curious Poses
  





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Mon Feb 16, 2015 3:13 am
TimmyJake says...



Why is Widdershins doing Fortis' reviews? o.o
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Mon Feb 16, 2015 3:34 am
Rook says...



Shaddup, or request a review.
My notifs said you had requested one. Imagine my disappointment when I found nothing for my claws to rip apart.
Instead, he said, Brother! I know your hunger.
To this, the Wolf answered, Lo!

-Elena Passarello, Animals Strike Curious Poses
  





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Thu Feb 19, 2015 1:15 am
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haven235 says...



Mind reviewing two? If not, the first one please.

Sowing Seeds

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Sat Apr 04, 2015 8:33 pm
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paula08 says...



Hey :) Can you review this poem for me please?

Placebo
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Sat Jul 18, 2015 5:49 am
Rook says...



le bump
Instead, he said, Brother! I know your hunger.
To this, the Wolf answered, Lo!

-Elena Passarello, Animals Strike Curious Poses
  





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Sun Jul 19, 2015 4:47 pm
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Lightsong says...



Hey. Please review my poem. The Religion of Education :)
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin
  





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Wed Jul 22, 2015 3:58 pm
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Prakash says...



Hi,
Can you please review my poem, 'The soldier's kiss'?
I got already some positive reviews, but I want someone to criticize my work. Be harsh!
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