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Wed Jul 22, 2015 11:47 pm
Rook says...



Done! Bring 'em on!
Instead, he said, Brother! I know your hunger.
To this, the Wolf answered, Lo!

-Elena Passarello, Animals Strike Curious Poses
  





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Tue Sep 22, 2015 4:02 am
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Hippyhoodrat says...



I'd love it if you took a look at Open Wound in my portfolio. I'm a new writer and in desperate need of feedback. I'll be sure to take your comments into consideration and make the necessary changes. Thanks so much.
  





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Tue Sep 29, 2015 8:37 am
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Lightsong says...



Please review An Arrival Later Unwelcomed. *nervously handing the poem* o.o"
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin
  





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Tue Nov 17, 2015 7:07 pm
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Poopsie says...



fort. I have a thingy here .3./

Glimpsing Infinity
The Poopsiest.

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I am 100 Percent Garbage
USED TO BE VERSER
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Sun Dec 27, 2015 9:04 pm
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Steggy says...



hola~

could you review this, please: internal problems

thank you. c:
You are like a blacksmith's hammer, you always forge people's happiness until the coal heating up the forge turns to ash. Then you just refuel it and start over. -Persistence (2015)

You have so much potential and love bursting in you. -Omnom
  





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Mon Dec 28, 2015 3:51 am
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Codayy says...



Spiraling Down

I'm ready for slaughter. I haven't met anybody that ripped apart any of my poems. That is why I choose you. :P

Thanks in advance!
  





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Sat Jan 02, 2016 4:07 am
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fukase says...



I'd love to see your review on this. Thanks~
I love Koku.
He is damn cute and should be the main character
and not some lazy old man that supposedly genius but a sucker in his own life.
Koku is Koku.
Koku is CUTE.
~ B-The Beginning (A Netflix Anime.)
  





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Fri Jan 29, 2016 10:46 pm
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Pretzelstick says...



me pwease

Seafoamy
A reader lives a thousand lives before he dies. The man who never reads only lives once
~George R. Martin

Life isn't about finding yourself; it's about recreating yourself. ~George B. Shaw

got yws?
  





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Mon Feb 01, 2016 9:50 am
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Mea says...



Hey....I kind of need someone to shred this for me. Thanks in advance. <3

In Memory
We're all stories in the end.

I think of you as a fairy with a green dress and a flower crown and stuff.
-EternalRain

I think you, @Deanie and I are like the Three Book Nerd Musketeers of YWS.
-bluewaterlily
  





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Sat Feb 27, 2016 8:36 pm
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Meerkat says...



Hello, fortis!
Would you kindly review my poem Mon Dernier Amour?
Thank you for your consideration. :)
"Sometimes it is better to light a flamethrower than curse the darkness." –Terry Pratchett
  





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Sat May 14, 2016 6:36 pm
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RippleGylf says...



Could you please review https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/RippleGylf/I-Have-Learned-to-Hate-the-Dark-129234?
"Eternity, I hear you calling, but you will not have me yet."
  





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Mon Aug 01, 2016 5:45 pm
Harker says...



Hey, I'd love to have you review this thing: greek toxin.

You haven't gotten any requests via this thread for a while, but it's tagged as still accepting, so I'll try my luck. ^^
John. Queer guy, writer, fan of stuff.

~ Some men are born in their bodies, others have to fight for it. ~
  





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Fri Oct 14, 2016 6:00 am
yakitsa says...



Hello hello hello,
this is my first published work on the website - not afraid to say
I'd really appreciate some feedback!
Thanks.
Life imitates art.
  





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Wed Aug 02, 2017 10:06 pm
Tylexie says...



Hello! I'm glad to finally find someone who actually likes reviewing poetry.

Could you review my poem, Fearing the Storm?

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/Tylexie/Fearing-the-Storm-136855
  





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Sun Oct 15, 2017 9:03 am
LizzieH3 says...



Hi, could you review my poem The Worry Child. I'm trying to progress as a poet and I would like both advice on the poem but also general advice based on what I've written which I can apply to other poems I write.
  








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