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Judgement Day



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Thu Jul 04, 2013 9:08 pm
ImHero says...



It is Judgement Day here at Young Writers Society.

1) I will decide to give you my approval with a like. The criteria is I have to like it! All bias aside if you have made art with your words you will get my approval.
2) I will have a content section of the review, and a structure section
3) I will rate your writing like this:
content: X/6
I will sometimes do Impact under content, depends on each piece.
Structure:X/6
-comment here why you got your score
Emotion:X/6
-comment

Thank you !

I do not offer extensive nit-picking
Accepting any request but novels may take a while to read!




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Wed Jul 17, 2013 10:27 pm
Jony says...



Hi, so I noticed that you have been studying Poe and other poets and I was wondering if you would review this.

It is a ballad inspired by Edgar Allen Poe's "Annabel Lee" and I am quite new to poetry, this is only the second poem I have sat down and seriously written. So I would love it if you could give me some pointers and tell me how to improve as a poet.
“In a Wonderland they lie, Dreaming as the days go by, Dreaming as the summers die:
Ever drifting down the stream- Lingering in the golden gleam- Life, what is it but a dream?”
― Lewis Carroll, Through the Looking Glass


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Wed Jul 24, 2013 9:08 pm
ImHero says...



C'mon people! ..taps foot..
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Thu Jul 25, 2013 2:45 pm
Aley says...



The Falling Sky This could stand another review. People don't seem to recognize the Villanelle still.
  





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Fri Jul 26, 2013 12:03 am
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Aley says...



Thanks for the review ImHero! I totally didn't notice that I had 11 syllables for the second repeat line DX I counted them like 5 times and every time I came up with ten XD
  





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Tue Jul 30, 2013 1:37 pm
ImHero says...



Welcome @Aley

..now, if only I had some more reviews...
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