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Tue Jun 18, 2013 5:05 am
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Welcome to Iggy's little corner of the YWS world! Submitted a wonderful new work? In need of some advice (and fangirling)? You've come to the right place!

Reviews may be delayed, but hopefully no longer than 2 weeks. It all depends on my real life, school, JM duties, etc. Please be patience and do not poke or nudge me. I am aware of your request and will get to it when I can.

I only review short stories, articles/essays, lyrics, and poetry though I am not the best poet. I do not review chapters unless it is the first chapter in the story or I have reviewed the previous ones. Genres I review are as followed: Romance, tragedy, fiction, sci-fi, horror, thriller, dystopian, supernatural, fantasy. All ratings are welcome. Sex, cursing, blood, gore - it doesn't bother me.

Optional forms of payment: cash, The Walking Dead cast, food, cats, general worship, or your souls.

.. <_< and I'm serious about the soul part.

I want those red stars, so go forth and request!
Last edited by Iggy on Sat Apr 05, 2014 2:48 am, edited 4 times in total.
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Tue Jun 18, 2013 4:41 pm
peanut19 says...



Iggy, this isn't a short story...It's a script, but I don't need any technical help. I need more help with the character development, if you want to take a look? Please? In On A Secret

And thank you? (But I understand if you don't want to.)
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Wed Jun 19, 2013 2:40 pm
Alpha says...



Hi Iggy!
I'd like to have my prologue examined.. It's a fantasy basically, but I don't know what's wrong with it.. help!
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=102154

Lotsa love
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Mon Jun 24, 2013 6:07 am
Iggy says...



Both have been reviewed! Who's next?
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Sat Jun 29, 2013 10:02 pm
Sins says...



Iggy, my home dawg

Could you please check out the first chapter of my novel? The Boy Who Broke Mirrors (Chapter One)

Thank you!
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Sun Jun 30, 2013 4:21 am
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Done! Anyone else? <3
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Fri Aug 23, 2013 6:55 am
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Anxious to get my fifth star. Help me out, lovelies!

Also edited post to allow poetry, though I cannot promise indepth reviews. I'm no expert.
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Tue Sep 03, 2013 3:38 pm
Sins says...



The Boy Who Broke Mirrors (Chapter Eight)

DESTROY IT (pls)

I'm not sure if you've read chapter seven... but don't worry about reviewing that or anything if you haven't. I ain't no greedy dawg.

Thanks bbe, ly
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Tue Sep 10, 2013 2:15 am
HostofHorus says...



IGGY! Would you be willing to review my work by chance? It is called The Other Side of Hell. Promise, it is rated E. :) Thanks in advance!

The Other Side of Hell
HostofHorus Author, Poet, Dreamer, and Expressionist.
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Wed Dec 25, 2013 2:13 am
Iggy says...



Both have been reviewed, finally. So sorry for the delay. x.x

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Mon Jan 06, 2014 11:03 am
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I'd really appreciate it if you could review my work: Meet me by the starry seacove, and I'll show you how to die
It's basically a short story, but I've posted it as "Other."
Thanks so much! :D
How to format poetry on YWS

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Wed Jan 08, 2014 11:54 pm
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Karma
Jan 25th is intentionally left blank
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Both have been reviewed!
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Wed Jan 22, 2014 9:47 pm
horrendous says...



hi Iggy. i'd like your awesome review powers applied to my new short story:

Eater of Dimensions, Part I

thanks in advance.
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Sat Jan 25, 2014 6:53 am
Iggy says...



All done~
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