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Mon May 05, 2014 1:54 am
musingsmutterings says...



Hi Iggy, I've got two pieces I love reviewed, but you don't have to do both. If you have more time, I have a longer short story called The Last Apple Tree. Otherwise, if you'd like to do something shorter, I'd like feedback on a poem called Americana Border. Thanks!
  





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Sat May 31, 2014 6:14 am
Iggy says...



Done!
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Fri Jun 06, 2014 3:32 pm
Dragongirl says...



Confetti Heart

Hey could you review this poem for me? I normally rhyme but didn't this time. I would love to know if this is total junk. Thanks.
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Sat Jun 07, 2014 2:52 pm
horrendous says...



hullo, Iggy. i started writing again and just finished yet another rewrite of The Pact's prologue and part two of chapter one. i'd like you to review both.

The Pact, Prologue
The Pact, Chapter One, Part Two

thanks so much!
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Wed Oct 01, 2014 4:16 am
Iggy says...



Bumping this.

Accepting review requests.
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Wed Oct 01, 2014 5:04 am
beans says...



I would love if you had a peek at my story as a whole... Just sort of a general overview thing. Ignore grammar and stuff, that's what editors are for. I'm aware I'm out of the green room, however I'm still lacking on a perspective of the greater picture.

Five chapters, one cup.

Ascension Prologue and Chapter 1
  





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Mon Oct 06, 2014 2:26 pm
Sins says...



hi pooface

I've started (trying) to write my novel again, and as someone who was reading it when I first posted it last year, I figured it'd be cool if you could check out the new second chapter I wrote for it.

The Boy Who Broke Mirrors - Chapter Two

Plz and thank u, and of course I shall return the favour the second you ask me!
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Tue Oct 28, 2014 3:12 am
Iggy says...



Reviewed~
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Sat Dec 13, 2014 10:27 am
Wriskypump says...



Hi Iggy. You've reviewed some of my earliest chapters, you may or may not remember. Anyway, my chapters are around 3,000 words usually, and so I don't get too many reviews and my stuff sits around. Can you help me?

Chapter 13 thru 15 are in the green room right now. If you could help me out on even one, I would be super grateful.

Where the Black Sheep Wrest - (Ch. 13): Reign Check

Where the Black Sheep Wrest - (Ch. 14): Grapple the Rains

Where the Black Sheep Wrest - (Ch. 15): Bad Blood
  





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Thu Jan 08, 2015 3:07 pm
yakitsa says...



Bling - Prologue (Part Two)

Okay, that's what I'd like you to review, and it's the Part Two of the prologue. I noticed in your instructions that it needs to be the 1st chapter and all, so you can read the First Part of the prologue as well! :p
I only need a review on the 2nd Part, though. Thanks!
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Thu Feb 05, 2015 11:40 pm
rainforest says...



Well, I am pretty desperate for a review, so here you go!

Welcome to the Boulevard of Suicide

Review away and thank you!
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Sat May 09, 2015 4:57 pm
Afternight says...



Greeting :-D
I was wondering if i could bother you for a really small review on a really short short story i wrote.
Inevitable Outcome Part 01: Flight (Edited)
no rush though
whenever you get to it
thank you
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Tue May 12, 2015 3:39 pm
TheTruth52732 says...



That is the second chapter rough draft, but the first chapter is uploaded as well.

World of Secrecy Chapter 2 Rough Rough Draft
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