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Wed Apr 02, 2014 4:58 am
PrehistoricEchoes says...



Mind taking a look at my Elementary storyline? Only one chapter so far, but I could use some feedback.

Link: Elementary (Chapter 1)
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Wed Apr 02, 2014 6:00 am
katngo73 says...



would be super super SUPER awesome if you reviewed my latest chapters on my Supernatural fanfic! <3
You did review my first chapter, http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=109918 And I absolutely loved your review!
I'm just asking if you'd be willing to review my other chapters:
Metaphorically Short : http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=110017
The Drifting Convoy : http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=110043
The Symbolic Cake : http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=110073
And the most depressing of all, The Desolation of Kevin Tran : http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=110074
THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU SO MUCH!
And as to what genre this includes: Fanfiction(Somewhat, but I've discovered this story can stand on its own as well.), Romance, Tragedy, Dramatic.
Enjoy all the feels! :)
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Wed Apr 02, 2014 6:39 am
IamTraunt says...



Hey Iggy! IamTraunt here!
Please could you review: Traunt: Chapter Three
Before you judge me...
Make sure you're perfect.


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Wed Apr 02, 2014 1:32 pm
dancingwatermelon says...



Hi! You seem like a popular reviewer. =) Do you think you could possibly review my Introishthing to my novel? It's pretty short, but it's my first story, so I'd really like some feedback.

The House of Sand-- Introduction
Here it is, if you feel so inclined as to review it for me.
  





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Sat Apr 05, 2014 3:20 am
Iggy says...



All have been reviewed.
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Mon Apr 07, 2014 11:58 am
DrFeelGood says...



Hi Iggy, Could you please review my short story, Exam Result Thanks!
  





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Mon Apr 07, 2014 7:46 pm
Iggy says...



All done.
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Sun Apr 13, 2014 8:20 pm
DrFeelGood says...



Hello Iggy, I have revised my novel. The Perfect Thief (Revised) Prologue :D Thanks in advance.
  





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Mon Apr 14, 2014 4:04 am
Iggy says...



Done.
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Tue Apr 22, 2014 8:40 pm
LadySpark says...



broken hearts can always mend

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hush, my sweet
these tornadoes are for you


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Sat Apr 26, 2014 1:24 am
DrFeelGood says...



Hi Iggy! I need your awesome review :D
The Perfect Thief Chapter 2 Thanks as always.
  





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Sat Apr 26, 2014 2:32 am
Iggy says...



Already was reviewing it. Just had to stop for dinner but I'll continue it.
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Tue Apr 29, 2014 3:52 pm
asadderandawiserman says...



Hey, if you're not too busy would you mind taking a look at my short story: Close Your Eyes

Thanks!
  





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Sat May 03, 2014 2:11 am
Iggy says...



All have been reviewed.
“I can't go back to yesterday because I was a different person then."
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