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Wed May 15, 2013 11:49 am
Wolferion says...



I welcome you to my little topic! Now that you are here, hear out what you can find here. If you're looking for a review that would focus on the impression of your work and every detail that might be wrong or good, except for some grammar mistakes, which I might not see, I'll gladly help you out with one and I won't ask for anything in return. Many people shamefully have had no reviews for a long time, some want more opinions, for both, as long as they do request, I'll help within my capabilities, but I'd also like to inform you, that I spend a substantial time writing my reviews in order to be of any good help, and thus you might have to wait a bit. I can review any work of writing and drawings, I would, however, deny to review a fan-fiction work, because I prefer originals to stay as they are in my memory.

Examples : 1) Harnesse - Episode 1 "Warning Signals" by Wariofart

Thanks for your time,
~Jeff
Last edited by Wolferion on Thu Jun 06, 2013 6:18 pm, edited 3 times in total.
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Mon May 20, 2013 3:26 am
BluesClues says...



Would you be willing to review a screenplay? I mean, it's too short and I definitely need more character development, so maybe I'd want to revise it first to at least amp up the character development...but if I do that and post it on YWS, would you be willing to read it?
  





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Mon May 20, 2013 7:21 am
Wolferion says...



Gladly, let me know when you post it and I'll take a look at it, let's make it good ;)
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Wed Jun 05, 2013 5:16 am
Wariofart says...



If you're still reviewing, can you review the first part of the pilot episode for a fantasy TV show I'm trying to write?

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Thanks!
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That my love keeps writing again and again
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Thu Jun 06, 2013 5:07 pm
Wolferion says...



Done~
~Don't beg for things, do it yourself or else you'll never get anything~
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