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Wed Apr 03, 2013 8:25 pm
gsppcrocks10 says...



Come on in! Don't be shy. I don't bite. Hard.

Do you want an in-depth, nitpicky review of your work? A review that, while it may not help your self esteem, will give you tips and pointers for how to make your work the best it can be? Then you've come to the right place! Just comment below and I'll write you a review in as timely a fashion as I can manage.
Just another quack spouting psychobabble.

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Wed Apr 03, 2013 10:00 pm
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Rainn says...



Here is a poem :)
Thanks!

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Fri Apr 05, 2013 1:29 am
WritingWolf says...



Could I please have a review for the 4th chapter of my story I'm writing for a contest?

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I could also use some name suggestions. :)
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Sat Apr 06, 2013 12:44 am
housecat says...



Yes, I need harsh criticism :D

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