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Thu Mar 21, 2013 12:45 pm
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Tue Mar 26, 2013 11:30 pm
AriesBlaze8 says...



I'll bite :)
I'm looking for opinions on "Ch1: The Nomad Boy (p1)" filed under "Resonance of Misko." So far I've gotten some good pieces of advice and a lot of praise but I'm really looking for someone who can pinpoint flaws and beat it to a pulp, heheh. Any thoughts on it would be amazing :D

Here's a direct link so you don't have to sift through my portfolio: work.php?id=100435
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Wed Mar 27, 2013 10:30 pm
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work.php?id=100496
This is the first chapter of my book Risk. This is the un edited version. Please check it out and leave a review.
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Thu Mar 28, 2013 4:57 am
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CandidDreamer wrote:http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=100496
This is the first chapter of my book Risk. This is the un edited version. Please check it out and leave a review.


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Fri Mar 29, 2013 2:54 pm
deliroast says...



Don't know if its too late, but I would like a review on Runaway Ch. 1
  





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Sat Mar 30, 2013 7:23 pm
WritingWolf says...



Hi Animal. I recently posted the beginning of a story I'm working on, and would like a review for it please. :)

work.php?id=100542

And I also posted a little essay/speech thing-a-ma-bob, I'd like a review on that to if possible.

work.php?id=100564

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Sat Apr 06, 2013 12:43 am
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work.php?id=100736 If you're comfortable with short stories, I'd really appreciate it.
  








Owning our story can be hard but not nearly as difficult as spending our lives running from it. Embracing our vulnerabilities is risky but not nearly as dangerous as giving up on love and belonging and joy—the experiences that make us the most vulnerable. Only when we are brave enough to explore the darkness will we discover the infinite power of our light.
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