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Mon Feb 18, 2013 12:38 am
Wherethewindgoes says...



Salutations. Would ye who has stumbled upon this thread wish for thy piece to hath a review?

What I Will Review: Anything, really. Novel chapters, short stories, poems; fantasy, science fiction, realistic fiction, non-fiction. First person, second person, third person; past tense, present tense, future tense (...maybe not). Anything at all!

How I Review: It depends on the piece. If I consider something flawed about the character, setting, or plot, I will talk about that. Generally, I'll spend a lot of the review on sentence-level things such as writing style and grammar. Poems will probably be shorter, and I'll talk about word choice, meaning, sound, etc. Note: If you specify in the request that you would specifically like some aspect of the piece to be reviewed, I'll focus on that. Also note that, unless specifically asked not to, I will review as if the piece was going to be published and correct grammar and typos and such.

Some examples, perhaps?

Short Stories:
work.php?id=9959
work.php?id=99803
work.php?id=99844

Novel Chapters:

One focused mostly on sentence-level things: work.php?id=99599

A more general one: work.php?id=99752

A review that talks about character and such:work.php?id=99425

Poems:

A stanza-by-stanza review: work.php?id=99971

A more general one about word choice and such: work.php?id=99802


Note: All review requests will be completed within two to three days of being posted here. (Probably.)
So, would anyone like a review?
Last edited by Wherethewindgoes on Fri Mar 01, 2013 11:31 pm, edited 6 times in total.
But if the silence takes you, then I hope it takes me too.

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Tue Feb 26, 2013 3:15 am
Wherethewindgoes says...



OK, I've completed yours, Adelina.
But if the silence takes you, then I hope it takes me too.

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Sun Mar 03, 2013 7:20 am
EmmVeePi says...



My dearest Where Hath The Wind Gone I would greatly appreciate a review of my poem Wonderlust. I offer nothing in return, only my eternal gratitude. Plz nd Thx http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=100106
  





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Sun Mar 03, 2013 3:32 pm
Wherethewindgoes says...



OK, EmmVeePi, your review has been completed. Would anyone else like a review?
But if the silence takes you, then I hope it takes me too.

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Fri Mar 08, 2013 7:01 am
justtheboy14 says...



Yes, please. :D
This story's been a permanent idea of mine for a while now, and I'm already assured I'll be making it one way or another. All I really have to work on is how I portray it, so people know what I'm trying to convey.

Anyways, I'm well aware that grammatical error is unavoidable in my work. Could you make a critique focusing more on the plot and character development, etc though? I'm looking forward to what you think of my story. Chapter 2's not yet finished. Anyways, thanks!

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Sat Mar 09, 2013 12:42 am
Wherethewindgoes says...



I have completed yours, justtheboy14.
But if the silence takes you, then I hope it takes me too.

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Thu Mar 14, 2013 5:31 pm
Clarity says...



work.php?id=100129 Review please?
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Sun Apr 07, 2013 4:04 am
Wherethewindgoes says...



I have finished yours, Clarity! (Well, I finished it while ago, but forgot to post.)

Is anyone else in need of a review?
But if the silence takes you, then I hope it takes me too.

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Sun Apr 07, 2013 8:17 pm
housecat says...



work.php?id=100736

I would love love love one c: this is a short story
  





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Sat Apr 13, 2013 2:29 am
Wherethewindgoes says...



I have finished yours, housecat! Sorry about the delay!

Would anyone else wish for a review?
But if the silence takes you, then I hope it takes me too.

A review?
  





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Sun Apr 14, 2013 9:34 am
Incandenza says...



Hi there,

I'd really love a review on this,

work.php?id=100892

thanks!
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Fri Apr 19, 2013 12:04 am
tragicHearts says...



when you can i would appreciate a review for part one of the first chapter to my novel.

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Fri Apr 26, 2013 1:55 am
lilcanich says...



If you would be so kind, I have a poem for thee:
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