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Sun Jan 20, 2013 4:36 pm
Hannah says...



... then this would be called "From the Mouth of Babes", but it's not and it's not.

Hey, y'all~ Here's the rundown:

I review:

anything

because I believe that your readers are going to come from absolutely all corners of the earth and whatever I have to say might clue you in to what their reactions would be, which you can then either deem valuable or discard.


The only thing I'd really shy away from would be:

fanfiction

that doesn't take the time to introduce the reader to the characters the way the original work would.


I do have some favorites, and that would be:

all poetry.

Still, just because my reviewing habits tend toward poems doesn't mean I can't do prose. I can do prose. I can really do prose. I love prose. I write prose. I have a college degree in prose. So submit your prose, too, guys.

As for a little more about how I'll review, I am working under the impression that you want to edit your piece to be publishable. That might not be your goal in the near or immediate future, but that's the place my reviews will come from, so if that's somehow not good for you, then hop to the next WRFF thread.

Other than that, I have nothing to say.
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Kafkaescence says...



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a bit of flashfiction for you to chew on.
#TNT

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Tue Jan 22, 2013 4:33 pm
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Chewed on it. Thank you!
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Wed Jan 23, 2013 6:36 am
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Chew on this, murr

Be as tough as you like. Or tougher. This one's been trouble.
  





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Wed Jan 23, 2013 3:39 pm
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Chewed on this one as well. Why was it trouble?
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Wed Feb 06, 2013 1:35 am
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Sunshine says...



A little nervous about asking for a review, but this is something I wrote awhile ago that I feel like I need a high-quality review on.

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I have loved the words and I have hated them. I only hope I have made them right.

---The Book Thief---

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Wed Feb 06, 2013 2:18 am
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You're all set, Sunshine. c:
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Tue Feb 12, 2013 6:18 pm
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niteowl says...



Here's my entry for Dog's Poetry Contest (it's gotten buried in the Green Room).

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=99689
"You do ill if you praise, but worse if you censure, what you do not understand." Leonardo Da Vinci

<YWS><R1>
  





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Morrigan says...



Can you look at this, please? I have no idea if it's good. And it got buried on Post 'em away Sunday.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=99673
"So many poems growing outta them they're practically a poet-tree"
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Mon Feb 18, 2013 4:00 pm
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Audy and Nite's are done. Magpie, you'll be tomorrow. (:
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Mon Feb 18, 2013 8:32 pm
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dogs says...



Could you help me out with this poem Hannah? It's a little rusty and for a history project. Thanks!

work.php?id=99840
Be a cool kid and do my Short Story Contest! viewtopic.php?f=404&t=97148&p=1122883#p1122883

"Quoth the Raven. Nevermore" - Edgar Allan Poe
  





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Tue Feb 19, 2013 3:10 am
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Magpie and dogs are now done, too~ (:
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Tue Feb 19, 2013 4:14 pm
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indieeloise says...



Hey, Hannah! Mind giving your thoughts on a poem of mine? It's the one I submitted for dogs' contest, but I edited it and worked through it after he tallied it in.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=99833
"My hobbies include editing my life story, hiding behind metaphors, and trying to convince my shadows that I am someone worth following." - Rudy Francisco
  





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Wed Feb 20, 2013 3:10 pm
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There y'are, other Hannah~
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