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Mon Mar 09, 2015 5:28 pm
megsug says...



@PickledChrissy is finished
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Tue Mar 10, 2015 4:46 pm
megsug says...



@Poseidon done~
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Tue Mar 17, 2015 9:35 pm
Dracula says...



Could you please review this?

Boy Who Cried Wolf
I bought a cactus. A week later it died. I got depressed because I thought Damn, I am less nurturing than a desert.
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Wed Mar 18, 2015 4:24 pm
psudiname says...



can you review the first chapter of my novel?
I would really appreciate it!

To The Stars Above (chapter 1)
if anyone wants a review, post on my profile and I'll get to it in a couple days.
  





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Thu May 21, 2015 5:10 pm
MissGangamash says...



Hey, could you please review my novel The Progeny? Here's the link to the prologue: The Progeny (Prologue)

I'd love it if you'd read it all and review each chapter and discuss how the story is progressing etc. but it is already quite long and only a third of it is up at the moment so I understand if you don't want to. If you only have time to read a chapter or two, could you focus on the latest chapters? They have the least reviews.

If you want me to review anything in return, let me know :D
  





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Sat May 23, 2015 11:38 pm
TheStormAroundMe says...



Umm... Do you still need stuff to review? If so... https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=121265

Thank Thank Thank You! :D
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Sun May 24, 2015 12:29 am
Handinredink says...



Hi, I would like it if you can review thishttps://www.youngwriterssociety.com ... ted-121091 , It is quiet short :) any advice would really be apprciated
  





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Sun May 24, 2015 10:00 am
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Sun May 31, 2015 11:42 pm
megsug says...



@beans is done (until he posts his next chapter) after a very long, patient wait
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Wed Jun 03, 2015 7:00 pm
artybirdy says...



The Stolen Bride

It's a short story I have posted today.

Thanks a lot if you're able to review it.

If not, I understand. :)

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Sat Jun 06, 2015 8:56 pm
megsug says...



@R2TheR is finished
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Thu Jun 18, 2015 3:58 pm
megsug says...



@Stormcrow is finished
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Fri Aug 28, 2015 1:40 pm
megsug says...



@psudiname is finished after a long while ;n; I know I'm slow, guys
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Fri Aug 28, 2015 10:27 pm
yizhongt says...



Hey megsug, do you think you could review:

Chalice of Life: Chapter 7

Thank you in advance !
  








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