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Wed Sep 02, 2015 1:43 am
megsug says...



@Handinredink done~
Since I'm participating in the Nawrirevmo challenge, I should be pumping out reviews faster this month, guys.
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Wed Sep 02, 2015 4:05 pm
elysian says...



hello!

Yes, I know I already have three reviews, but I just want to make sure I have people that will follow and review as I post chapters! Just any tips or corrections you can give me, I'm open to it!

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elysian: (adj.) beautiful or creative; divinely inspired; peaceful and perfect.

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Fri Sep 11, 2015 3:19 pm
Lightsong says...



Please review Bad Lights, Good Lights [Chapter 2.1] for me! Thanks! :D
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The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

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Fri Sep 11, 2015 5:10 pm
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Hello ! would you please review my work The Ripper ? Who is that ? (chapter 1) and thanks
  





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Wed Sep 16, 2015 8:12 pm
paula08 says...



HI, can you review my short poem, please?

This is the link:

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Fri Oct 30, 2015 2:33 am
DiskElemental says...



Hey,

Looking to get a bit of feedback on the first part of the first chapter of my NaNo novel. I'm largely interested in making sure it "works" as a hook, and doesn't overwhelm the reader with information.

Thanks,
Disk
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Sun Nov 01, 2015 9:37 am
lawrence says...



can you review this for me?? please?? i just need some opinion. thank you :D :D

Dececption - Chapter One - Words Betray
  





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Sun Nov 15, 2015 7:50 pm
Lavenderfields says...



Hello, I am looking for a reviewer on the first bit of a novel. Would really appreciate your feedback! On The Way To Eternity
  





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Fri Dec 18, 2015 5:16 am
Charm says...



Hi! :smt003 I would love it if you read my novel New Haven! Here are the links to the chapters:

New Haven: Chapter 1: Waves
New Haven: Chapter 2: The Train of Memories
New Haven: Chapter 3: Ellington Academy
New Haven: Chapter 4: A Lot of Introductions (To Eloise's Horror)
New Haven: Chapter 5: What Lay Behind The Doors
New Haven: Chapter 6: Was He Okay?

I really want reviews on chapter 6. You don't have to read all the chapters to understand chapter 6, you just have to read chapter 1. They are both flashbacks and are closely linked. But if you have time I would love it if you could review all of the novel that I have out. There are some chapters that have a lot of review and some that have barely any. Sorry if my grammar and sentences are horrible, it's late and my brain is not functioning properly due to a migraine.
  





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Tue Jan 05, 2016 6:04 pm
megsug says...



@yizhongt is done for the time being~
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Thu Jan 07, 2016 9:14 pm
Nommie says...



Hellos there Meg >u</

Would you be interested in reviewing this new favorite story of mine?

White Bird
Fantasy/Romance Rated M - Novel Story
(for later chapters) It starts out 12+
Currently at two chapters, total 2k+ each.


A young maiden living at the foot of a mountain, cut off from the world, wishes for the chance to meet another living soul. Her wish is finally granted, but in the form of a badly bruised and beaten wolf. With a nurturing heart, she cares for the creature and brings it back to good health. Only to discover it's hardly the normal animal she believed it to be..

I'd like if you could look more towards the pace and characters.
Something I worry about the most lol

Thank you in advance! :3
  





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Fri Jan 08, 2016 10:21 pm
Meerkat says...



Hello, I'm Meerkat!

Would you please review my short story? It's quite brief, and I need some constructive criticism.

When the Dust Settles

Thank you very much for your time!
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Sun Jan 10, 2016 5:49 pm
Lightsong says...



Hey! I'd like it if you review Bad Lights, Good Lights [Chapter 7.2]! Thanks! :D
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin
  





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Sat Jan 23, 2016 11:41 pm
AnarchyWolf says...



Could you do 'The Winged'?

The Winged - 01. Delivery Boy Nik

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