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Fri Sep 12, 2014 3:37 am
Deanie says...



Hi Meg!

I know you are already reviewing something for me, so feel free to say no. But I would really appreciate a review on this short story:

The Cold Wind of Death

Oh and, all the run on sentences are purposeful. Trying out stream of consciousness style :D
Trust in God and all else follows.

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Fri Sep 12, 2014 3:44 am
megsug says...



Stream of consciousness <3
Though it can be a bear to read xP
I'll be happy to read it for you soon~
I'm going on a retreat this weekend (so excited), so it won't be tomorrow (probably) or the next day or the next, but it will be soon!
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Tue Sep 16, 2014 1:25 pm
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@Deanie is done~ Who's next?
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Sun Sep 21, 2014 12:18 am
EscaSkye says...



Hi there! If you don't mind, would you kindly review this short story I have?

Stupid Heart

It's divided into two parts, only because I wanted to make it a little less intimidating to read. Both are up now though! :D

Thank you!
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Wed Sep 24, 2014 9:58 pm
TheCrimsonLady says...



Hello!

A request:

Darkman's Hour: Prologue

Thanks!
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Wed Oct 08, 2014 3:21 am
megsug says...



Escaskye is done!
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Sun Oct 12, 2014 5:12 am
Dracula says...



So only do one if you don't want to do both, but they've been sitting in the Green Room for a while with only one review.

Foxglove: Chapter Three

Foxglove: Chapter Four

They're really small so it shouldn't be hard.

Thank you!!
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Mon Oct 20, 2014 12:06 am
megsug says...



@Aurora99 is finished! Sorry for the wait, guys.
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Wed Oct 22, 2014 5:26 pm
JumpyDot says...



Here there be Darkness :1.2:
I'm going to do a quick logline, okay? People go out in the darkness of the night to find people and guide them home, two of these people find the king.
  





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Mon Oct 27, 2014 2:59 pm
megsug says...



@joshuacampbell finished
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Sat Nov 08, 2014 2:45 am
horrendous says...



Testiculosis, Parts One Through Five

warning, much foul language and mature content
hor·ren·dous
adjective: shockingly dreadful; horrible
synonyms: appalling, frightful, hideous

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Sat Nov 08, 2014 4:01 am
carmenbluestar says...



here's one for you but I'm not sure how to add just the title as a link so this is the best I can do. Down the Rabbit Hole Chapter 1
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Tue Nov 11, 2014 9:42 am
beans says...



I would like very much if you have this chapter a look-see, though it might benefit you to read the rest of the story because context and stuff. Rated 18 for language and some mature content.

Ascension Prologue 2
  





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Sat Nov 22, 2014 4:11 pm
gauravkundu32 says...



Can you please review this chapter
Diakrino - The Darkness within (Preface/Introduction)
Thanks.
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