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Thu Nov 12, 2015 2:34 am
Lightsong says...



Link: You are the Reason I Died
Title: You are the Reason I Died
Media: Short Story
Genre: Dramatic, Teen Fiction (I guess)
Additional note: This story has some slightly explicit sexual details, so if you aren't comfortable with that, you can refuse to review it. I don't mind. :D
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

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Sat Nov 14, 2015 5:55 am
Eros says...



Please will you review my work :
A request for a review... ~Eros
NOVEL : Mohit--The Person Who Changed Me This chapter 2 of my novel... You may read chapter 1 also, before reading this chapter...
It has got only 1 review and is still lying lying n the green room... :(
  





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Mon Nov 16, 2015 2:08 pm
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Carlito says...



All caught up and ready for more! :)
It does not do to dwell on dreams and forget to live.

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Thu Nov 19, 2015 10:46 pm
artybirdy says...



Hello! I'd love it if you could review one of my short stories:
1. Broken Trust | Unedited
2. Divorce: A Cultural Stigma
Thank you!
[center]Previously known as ArtStyx[/center]
  





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Mon Nov 23, 2015 4:17 am
Pretzelstick says...



Heya Carlito, I would really love to get your feedback on my newly published short story, which I am planning to turning into a novella maybe someday. Any critiques would be appreciated, as this is a very rough draft. Thanks!
Test of Freedom
A reader lives a thousand lives before he dies. The man who never reads only lives once
~George R. Martin

Life isn't about finding yourself; it's about recreating yourself. ~George B. Shaw

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Tue Nov 24, 2015 7:13 am
felistia says...



Hi Felistia here. I would love if you could review the novel I am writing. It is a fantasy and action\adventure novel, but is also a loose fan fiction on the books Wings of Fire. I would love if you could follow the story chapter by chapter. :D :D :D
https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Search-for-the-Ruby-of-Fire-Chapter-1-124445
  





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Fri Nov 27, 2015 12:15 am
Carlito says...



Caught up and ready for more! :D

@felistia - it will take me a little while to get through all of it, but I'm on it!
It does not do to dwell on dreams and forget to live.

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Fri Nov 27, 2015 7:50 am
Lightsong says...



Please review Bad Lights, Good Lights [Chapter 6.1]! As an intermission chapter, the focus is on Flaxen's light companion, a guy Merah found in school who could run faster than human could. :D Thank you!
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

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Sat Jan 23, 2016 4:04 pm
Carlito says...



Re-open! Please note that I am not currently accepting full manuscripts or novel following right now.
@felistia & @Lightsong - I haven't forgotten about you guys and I will be getting all caught up on your novels very soon! Thank you for being patient :D
It does not do to dwell on dreams and forget to live.

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Sat Jan 23, 2016 4:14 pm
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It's fine, it's fine! Take your time - I don't want you to feel like I'm burdening you. I understand your situation since you're following many novels. :D
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin
  





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Sun Jan 24, 2016 12:05 am
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felistia says...



Don't sweat it. :D
  





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Mon Feb 01, 2016 12:16 pm
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Sins says...



Carlitooooo (that's what your name sounds like in my head btw)

Just wondering, could you take a look at this novel I'm re-posting? Would be super swell, and muchly appreciated!

The Boy Who Broke Mirrors (Chapter One)

No rush or anything of the sorts, of course. Please and thank you :)
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Thu Feb 04, 2016 3:48 am
Carlito says...



Ready for more! :D
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Thu Feb 04, 2016 4:16 am
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Dreamworx95 says...



Hey Carlito, first I want to say sorry that our critique correspondence didn't work out a few months ago! Your critiques were really helpful but I ended up moving onto other projects. That being said, I'd love to have a critique from you on a new novel I just started. It's a medieval fantasy genre, which I hope you will like. Here is the first chapter: Everlasting - Chapter 1: Raiders

Can't wait to hear from you.

PM me if you want me to review anything of yours.

-Dream
  





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Sat Feb 06, 2016 6:18 pm
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Lightsong says...



Hey ya! Please review Ruby of Revenge [Part 1] for me. :3 Thanks! :D
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin
  








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