Hey, don't know if you're still accepting but I would really appreciate it if you could maybe take a look at the novel I'm currently working on! I only have the first two chapters up so far but intend to keep updating it as I go on. It is YA (teen fiction)
Name of Work: Bad Lights, Good Lights Genre: Fantasy, mystery/suspense Link: Bad Lights, Good Lights [Chapter 3.3] requests: Whichever review style you think is the best Important information: Merah, her friend Sarah, and her brother Imran, went to the portal place to get Imran's light, Silver. They needed it to add more help. Lights were a species from another world who came here to help humans stop their bad people from destroying mankind.
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Hey Carlito! I was wondering if you'd be able to offer some feedback on my YA contemporary novel-ish thing? I know you said to PM you about full manuscripts, but long story short, this was originally meant to be a super-long short story that I eventually realised needed to be a novel, so I don't really see it as a full manuscript. It's all up on YWS though, so if you want to read it all and review it as a whole or go on a chapter by chapter basis I'm happy either way. I'm planning on rewriting it once school's over, so I thought it wouldn't hurt to get another pair of eyes to look at it, and since you've said you like YA contemporary...
I've already got a fair few reviews on it, so if you want to only review certain chapters, or something that's fine. There's also no rush!
Hi. I was wondering if you could follow a series of mine and review each chapter. The series is called the Schadel Files. It is in both the fantasy and mystery genres. Right now, I only have The Case of the Necromancer-For-Hire, and am almost done with that, but I have two more stories in the making. If you do end up following it, thanks in advance. And if you don't, thank you for thinking about it. Here's the link for the first chapter if you choose to read it. The Case of the Necromancer-For-Hire: Chapter 1
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