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Wed Aug 26, 2020 1:33 am
Carlito says...



I'd be happy to @MaxaM! I may wait for RevMo to start next week, and then I'm all over it :)
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Sun Dec 06, 2020 5:50 pm
momonster says...



Hello @Carlito! I was wondering if you could review my WIP I am Mari please? Thank you! No worries if you can't get to it soon. (:
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Thu Dec 17, 2020 9:20 pm
MissGangamash says...



Hey! Would you be interested in reviewing my novel? It’s called The Rage and it’s about a group of vampires living in a small village and their secret has come out. If you have the time, I’d love for you to go through the whole novel but if not, could you check out the latest 2 chapters? 19 & 20? The Rage (Chapter 19)
  





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Mon Feb 08, 2021 1:23 pm
MailicedeNamedy says...



Hi Carlito,

could you please review my chapters/parts from my novel?

Title: Longing of a Maiden Rose

Genres: Coming of Age, Youth, Mystery, 1920s, Running Away, Freedom, Travel

Short description: When Emma returns from her grandfather's, she tells her best friend Claire about Léonard, a mysterious young man who wants to solve a murder. Claire is about to turn eighteen and her father has already planned her future, so Léonard comes just in the right moment. Against all reason, Claire decides to run away from home and follow Léonard. Emma travels with her, thinking she could spend her life together with him without knowing anything about his background or motives.

Service: Chapter-by-chapter-reviews (if possible) I´m open to any criticism. :)

Link: Longing of a Maiden Rose -Ch.I Part 1

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