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Sun May 20, 2018 5:26 pm
Lightsong says...



Hohoho, what do we have here? :D

1. Name of the novel: Dancer of the Fire Blade
2. Genre of the novel: Fantasy, mystery, action

3. 1-4 sentences about what the novel is about (no spoilers):

Ilami is a teenager forced to kill someone to get into the academy in which her mother is the principal. Unknown to her, there is more to the academy and the person she has to kill might be more than a random target. Meanwhile, Gael struggles to deal with his feelings on his best friend, Haka, while dealing the setbacks of being the only student who has no inherent magic in the academy. When Ilami and Gael meet, their differences bring them closer to each other, and also to the mystery the academy holds.

4. What service are you after (and include any specific concerns/things you want me to cover): Chapter-by-chapter review. I mainly want focus on characters, worldbuilding, and plot.

5. If this is an isolated chapter request, please link the chapter(s). If this is a chapter by chapter request, please link the first chapter/preface. If this is a full manuscript or mentor request, I will PM you: Chapter 1.1: Ilami

Thanks for the consideration! :D
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Tue May 22, 2018 1:56 am
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Carlito says...



You're on the list @Lightsong! I'll get to the first chapter by the end of the week :)
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Tue May 22, 2018 3:33 am
Lightsong says...



Thanks! :D
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

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Wed Jun 27, 2018 8:25 am
Lightsong says...



Hi, are you still following my novel? :)
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The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

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Tue Jul 03, 2018 5:04 pm
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Carlito says...



Lightsong wrote:Hi, are you still following my novel? :)


Yes! I plan on reading more of it today :D
(I got behind because of a family vacation, sorry about that!)
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Sat Jul 14, 2018 3:12 am
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ChristenedPages says...



Hey, so I just posted a Prologue and Chapter One to my novel (I literally joined 2 days ago lol). Looking for any reviews at all, anything helps.

Title: Achromatic
Links: Achromatic- Prologue , Achromatic- Chapter One
Genres: Fantasy, Science Fiction, Teen Fiction
Type of Review: anything you feel like

Thank you! <3
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Wed Jul 18, 2018 1:24 am
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Carlito says...



Welcome welcome @ChristenedPages!! I got you! Your reviews are finished! :D
Sorry for the delay!
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Thu May 30, 2019 4:00 am
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nogutsnoglory says...



Hi, I'd like to be put on the waitlist for a chapter by chapter review for Too Much Blank Space, Not Enough Vomit. It's a realistic, narrative teen fiction involving mental illness, sexual abuse, drug use, love, loss, and identity as well as coming of age. The main character, Rhys, is also transgender. It's a bit dark and gritty and rated as eighteen and up. Thanks!
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Wed Jun 05, 2019 12:13 am
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Saichi says...



Link to Piece: The Origin: Prologue
Type of Piece (Whether it's a novel, poetry, etc): It's a novel
Age rating: 12+
Any other comments (Optional):Would be a great help! Thank you so much!
  





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Mon Sep 02, 2019 9:37 am
wetumbrella6 says...



Hi.

I would be glad if you can review the first chapter of my novel named "Jaime".

It is 9k words long.

Here's the link to it:

Jaime (working title) chapter 1

thanks so much for considering
  





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Mon Sep 23, 2019 7:55 pm
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Liberty says...



Hiya! I'd like to be put on the wait list for the chapter-by-chapter reviews. :)

1. Name of the novel
Unlucky 13

2. Genre of the novel
Uh... Mostly teen-fiction, I guess. No romance. It's a sort of a mystery/adventure (ish) type. Actually, not adventure at all. :}

3. 1-4 sentences about what the novel is about (no spoilers)
Ah, mostly about this thirteen year old girl who has issues with friends, cousins, family, etc. She lives in Chicago, but when she goes to Quebec to see her cousins for the first time, Julia's life goes flippety flop! ;)

4. What service are you after (and include any specific concerns/things you want me to cover)
Uhh, basically everything! Grammar and punctuation, I'm really hoping, but if you can't do that, it's cool. I want to really know if the plot is okay, and if you think it's all flowing together well enough. ^^

5. If this is an isolated chapter request, please link the chapter(s). If this is a chapter by chapter request, please link the first chapter/preface. If this is a full manuscript or mentor request, I will PM you.
Unlucky 13 - Chapter 1
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