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K's Killa Kritiques



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Sat Jun 02, 2012 12:48 pm
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Karzkin says...



Y'all know the drill.

The Rules

1. Poetry only

2. I tell it like it is, yo.

3. I play the saxophone a lot. You may have to wait a little. Or a lot. Or indefinitely.
Last edited by Karzkin on Sat Jan 02, 2016 7:33 am, edited 6 times in total.
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

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Sun Jun 03, 2012 10:43 am
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Lumi says...



Watch me pop that ch-- I mean be your first review request.
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Sun Jun 10, 2012 7:58 am
Karzkin says...



Done. Didn't need much, just a scratching.
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

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Wed Jul 04, 2012 4:16 pm
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Karzkin says...



Donezors.
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Sat Jul 07, 2012 2:23 pm
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youngwriter says...



work.php?id=96306 review mine please?:)

PS. The work doesnt set out properly, so after every 4 lines its a new stanza x
I <3 Turtles :D
  





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Tue Jul 10, 2012 10:40 am
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Karzkin says...



Done.
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

K's Killa Kritiques

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All Hail the undisputed king of the YWS helicopter game.
  





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Tue Jul 17, 2012 2:02 pm
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Master_Yoda says...



This please: work.php?id=96465
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The woods are lovely, dark and deep.
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep.
-- Robert Frost

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Sat Jul 21, 2012 4:16 pm
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Karzkin says...



Done. The review was uninspired (a far cry from the poem itself).
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

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All Hail the undisputed king of the YWS helicopter game.
  





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Sun Jul 22, 2012 9:33 am
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Rydia says...



Please and thank you!
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Mon Jul 23, 2012 3:25 pm
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This please, when you get a chance.
She reflected. "I prefer stories about squalor."
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Mon Jul 23, 2012 4:30 pm
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Rainn says...



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Hello, Would you mind doing a review for me? I like harsh (:
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Tue Jul 24, 2012 12:52 pm
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Karzkin says...



Done Rainn's (because it was relatively quick). Sheesh, a backlog! And right when I went back to uni D:
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

K's Killa Kritiques

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All Hail the undisputed king of the YWS helicopter game.
  





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Fri Jul 27, 2012 1:18 pm
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Caesar says...



Sbam.
vulgus vult decipi, ergo decipiatur


  








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