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K's Killa Kritiques



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Fri May 03, 2013 3:13 am
ToritheMonster says...



http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=101321#c359205

This is prose, so if you don't consider it poetry and don't want to review it, it's all good. :smt003

If you do, thank you in advance!
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Wed Jun 19, 2013 6:50 am
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Januaryblues says...



Hey Kar,

could you review this for me, please?

Looking Up

Thanks
  





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Wed Jun 19, 2013 3:14 pm
Karzkin says...



Tori, no prose. Sorry.
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

K's Killa Kritiques

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Wed Jun 19, 2013 3:42 pm
Karzkin says...



Other Blues done.
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

K's Killa Kritiques

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All Hail the undisputed king of the YWS helicopter game.
  





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Sun Aug 18, 2013 12:04 am
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Twit says...



Peep Show, thanks.
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Sat Aug 24, 2013 9:07 am
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Dmytra says...



Please, could you review this? I will certainly return the favor.

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Sun Sep 01, 2013 6:02 am
Karzkin says...



Twit done.
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

K's Killa Kritiques

#TNT

All Hail the undisputed king of the YWS helicopter game.
  





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Sun Sep 01, 2013 6:31 am
Karzkin says...



Dmytra done.
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

K's Killa Kritiques

#TNT

All Hail the undisputed king of the YWS helicopter game.
  





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Tue Nov 26, 2013 9:07 pm
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indieeloise says...



It's prose poetry, I promise. I apologize for the terrible formatting. Much more marginalized in the Word document I originally typed it up in.

the carpenter's son
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Wed Nov 27, 2013 3:00 pm
Karzkin says...



Indie done.
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

K's Killa Kritiques

#TNT

All Hail the undisputed king of the YWS helicopter game.
  





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Sun Dec 29, 2013 5:15 am
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BadNarrator says...



Endless Summer
First you will awake in disbelief, then
in sadness and grief and when you wake
the last time, the forest you've been
looking for will turn out to be
right in the middle of your chest.
  





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Wed Jan 01, 2014 4:12 pm
Karzkin says...



BadNarrator done.
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

K's Killa Kritiques

#TNT

All Hail the undisputed king of the YWS helicopter game.
  





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Sun Jan 05, 2014 11:28 am
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Laure says...



http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=107372

Hi, I would appreciate it a lot if you could review this poem for me. *bows*
  





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Fri Jan 01, 2016 12:30 pm
Karzkin says...



After a short pause, we're back in business.
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

K's Killa Kritiques

#TNT

All Hail the undisputed king of the YWS helicopter game.
  








Revision is one of the exquisite pleasures of writing.
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