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Wed Feb 22, 2012 3:12 pm
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Paracosm says...



Hey guys! I want more stars, so I need to do more reviews. That, and since points have been down, reviews are a little scarce. So in an attempt to stimulate the reviewconomy... er, no... revienomy... no.... To get more reviews going, just ask for one here. Okay! Fire away!

I should probably specify the things I like and don't like to review.

Like
Short Stories
Fantasy
Mystery
Most all fiction


Don't Like
Poetry
Lyrics
Fanfiction


Also, if you ask for one and I don't review it within a day or two, PM me because I haven't checked this thread to see if I had any requests.
Review unto others as you would have others review unto you.

Don't panic!

Also, Shino!
  





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Thu Mar 01, 2012 9:51 am
emilybrodo says...



This thread seemed empty so I thought I'd come by and give you something to review if you wouldn't mind.
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=93160
It's a fantasy. Don't be fooled, just because they happen to be in hell doesn't mean I'm religious. Anyway, enjoy!
“There are two ways to live: you can live as if nothing is a miracle; you can live as if everything is a miracle.” - Albert Einstein

The game

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Thu Mar 01, 2012 7:59 pm
Inkswirl says...



Hello, mind taking a quick look at this? It's not very long, I'd be very grateful. Thanks! :)

work.php?id=93533
~I happen to feel the degree of a person's intelligence is directly reflected by the number of conflicting attitudes they can bring to bear on the same topic~
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Fri Mar 02, 2012 1:49 am
DontStopBelieving says...



May I ask you to take a look at this? Please.
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=93761
I would love a honest review.
I am thinking about making that story a book.
If the world is supposed to be so bad, then why am I not complaining?
  





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Sat Mar 03, 2012 6:59 am
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Paracosm says...



Woohoo! Alright, I'll get to it guys! It might be at least a day or two before you hear back from me, but I'll do my best. I'm a very slow reviewer. Time to get on it!
Review unto others as you would have others review unto you.

Don't panic!

Also, Shino!
  





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Sun Mar 04, 2012 7:47 am
emilybrodo says...



This is a piece my friend wrote, since she hasn't received any reviews she's been feeling a little down. Could you help out?
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=93795
“There are two ways to live: you can live as if nothing is a miracle; you can live as if everything is a miracle.” - Albert Einstein

The game

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Tue Mar 06, 2012 3:40 am
VampireSenshi says...



If you have the time!

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=93649 - it's the first part of a novel I may write...
<YWS>
<NE1>

NIGHT is always watching...
  





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Tue Mar 06, 2012 5:27 pm
Paracosm says...



Okay! I may not actually get to write anymore reviews for... awhile to say the least. I have a tournament this weekend and my sister is visiting with the family. I'll review these when I get a chance, but I can't make any guarantees as to when I'll get a chance! Feel free to send me messages every day asking for a review, I need these to remind me, for you see, between obsessive compulsive, bipolar, and possibly ADHD tendencies, I forget to do things.. a lot.
Review unto others as you would have others review unto you.

Don't panic!

Also, Shino!
  





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Tue Mar 06, 2012 7:19 pm
ArahAkachi1 says...



I know I may be late, but here's my work that I would like reviewed. It has a part two, but I don't know if I'm allowed to post it too. Review whenever you free time Shino.
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=90412
Writing your name can lead to writing sentences. And then the next thing you'll be doing is writing paragraphs, and then books. And then you'll be in as much trouble as I am!
  





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Tue Mar 13, 2012 10:25 pm
kitkatimaginethat says...



Please review my short story. "Untitled - Jessie and Jenny" I think...need a new title too. If you wnat to just review part of it that's ok.
  





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Sat Mar 24, 2012 8:02 pm
Paracosm says...



Okay! I'm hopping to it as we speak!
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Sun Mar 25, 2012 10:41 am
Caesar says...



Will you please review my work titled 'Great Entities- Chapter One'? :D
And yes, it is based in a region similar to several types of hell, but no, I'm not religious.
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Fri Apr 13, 2012 3:47 am
Paracosm says...



Hey guys! I've determined I don't have time to keep my review forum open all the time. :( It is officially closed for now! I will be sure to inform you guys when I'm able to accept new stories. That probably won't be until I finish reviewing these stories.

I'll get to it this weekend. Just got back from a trip and I have unpacking and other just-got-back-from-a-trip things to do.I also have a phone bill to pay.... just remembered that as a matter of fact.

Okay! No more whining on my part! Time to write! Love you guys!
Review unto others as you would have others review unto you.

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