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Poetry and Romance Review



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Wed Feb 15, 2012 2:28 pm
misstoria says...



I will review poetry of any type and romantic short stories. I will occasionally review romantic novels as well. :D
You are more than the choices that you've made, you are more than the sum of your past mistakes. You are more than the problems you create, You'v been remade.

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Wed Feb 15, 2012 3:03 pm
unsocialbutterfly says...



I'd love for you to review some of my stuff?
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Thu Feb 16, 2012 2:57 pm
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misstoria says...



Post the links to a couple pieces that need reviews :)
You are more than the choices that you've made, you are more than the sum of your past mistakes. You are more than the problems you create, You'v been remade.

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Thu Feb 16, 2012 7:02 pm
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unsocialbutterfly says...



And this one please
work.php?id=93123
Thanks so much since the the new YWS was made its been so hard to get reviews! :)
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Thu Feb 16, 2012 7:31 pm
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misstoria says...



Your welcome, I completely agree.
You are more than the choices that you've made, you are more than the sum of your past mistakes. You are more than the problems you create, You'v been remade.

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Thu Feb 16, 2012 10:23 pm
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unsocialbutterfly says...



Thanks for the reviews! I've always struggled with the punctuation and stuff so thanks for pointing that out!
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Sun Feb 19, 2012 1:50 pm
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Sageleaf says...



Hey misstoria, I would love some reviews!
(These are both poems)
work.php?id=93520
work.php?id=93256

Thanks! Do you have anything you would like me to review for you?

Sage
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Tue Feb 21, 2012 1:40 pm
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misstoria says...



This is a essay I wrote for a contest, if you would like to I could really use a review: work.php?id=93468
You are more than the choices that you've made, you are more than the sum of your past mistakes. You are more than the problems you create, You'v been remade.

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Wed Feb 22, 2012 11:00 pm
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TheClosetKidnapper says...



Would you mind reviewing this? It's for a class assignment due at the end of the week so I need all the help I can get.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=93580

Thank you!
I'm never what I like
I'm double sided
And I just can't hide
I kind of like it
When I make you cry
'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up
Inside

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