Hello! I was wondering if you could critique my NEWWW and improved Prologue for Keychain Magic which I have worked very hard on in updating. Thank you!
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hi! um could you review my story please. i shortened my first chapter into half. i don't think its a good start so i would like others review(tired of beging my younger siblings to read it.younger! they never read it) i suck at the begining please help point out what mmy problems are.thanks work.php?id=93995
if you review poetry(i forgot what you wrote on the first page) please review the one whose link is shown below.
thanks a bunch!
Do the people think that they will be left to say, "We believe" and they will not be tried? (29:2)
Hey, this looks like a cool place. Do you mind reviewing a (somewhat long) short story of mine? It's been up a super long time, but people appear to be afraid of it due to the length. Also, feel free to be as harsh as you like!
Hello! I just posted my first piece recently, and I was wondering if you'd have time to do a Quick Critique. It's just a novel I'm writing for fun, but feedback is always nice. Here it is: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=94160
I will pay with a review of my own, if you'd like. Thanks in advance!
More than anything she wanted the world to be uncomplicated, for right and wrong to be as easily divided as the black and white sections of an Oreo. But the world was not a cookie. — Roshani Chokshi, Aru Shah and the Tree of Wishes
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