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Sat Jan 28, 2012 1:20 am
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fiction903 says...



Hello, I'm fiction and as part of my new years resolution I have chosen to give free reviews. I am a very busy person but I will try to get back to you in a prompt manner. I am in advanced english at my school and I like to write. I hope that reviewing other peoples writing will make me a better writer. I have a ton of room for improvement. So everyone, let the reviews begin.
  





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Sat Jan 28, 2012 2:06 am
Wariofart says...



Hey! Do you think you could review the first chapter of my novel, -Post? viewtopic.php?f=365&t=92977
Thanks!
"This is a song for a scribbled out name
That my love keeps writing again and again
And again"
  








"The day, which was one of the first of spring, cheered even me by the loveliness of its sunshine and the balminess of the air. I felt emotions of gentleness and pleasure, that had long appeared dead, revive within me. Half surprised by the novelty of these sensations, I allowed myself to be borne away by them, and forgetting my solitude and deformity, dared to be happy."
— Mary Shelley, Frankenstein