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Sat Jan 28, 2012 1:20 am
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fiction903 says...



Hello, I'm fiction and as part of my new years resolution I have chosen to give free reviews. I am a very busy person but I will try to get back to you in a prompt manner. I am in advanced english at my school and I like to write. I hope that reviewing other peoples writing will make me a better writer. I have a ton of room for improvement. So everyone, let the reviews begin.
  





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Sat Jan 28, 2012 2:06 am
Wariofart says...



Hey! Do you think you could review the first chapter of my novel, -Post? viewtopic.php?f=365&t=92977
Thanks!
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That my love keeps writing again and again
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"The trouble with Borrowing another mind was, you always felt out of place when you got back to your own body, and Granny was the first person ever to read the mind of a building. Now she was feeling big and gritty and full of passages. 'Are you all right?' Granny nodded, and opened her windows. She extended her east and west wings and tried to concentrate on the tiny cup held in her pillars."
— Terry Pratchett, Discworld: Equal Rites