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Wed Jan 25, 2012 2:32 am
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Jas says...



Hi world!

I want to review your story!

I'll review anything prose except:

Fantasy
Science Fiction
Non-fiction

My reviews:

I normally give a brief summary, then I quote sentences and parts I liked and didn't like, explain my problems with them, do character and plot analysis then finish with another summary and a final grade.

Here are a few links to some of my prose reviews:

Novels-

The Diamond Fist by AhmedBlues

Bach's Lullaby by Trigger

Short stories-

Skeleton Girl by ancientforever

Two Weeks, One by thatoddkid

Other-

Daffodils by Jelly


K, so link me and I'll review asap! :]
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~
  





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Wed Jan 25, 2012 3:42 am
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GoldenQuill says...



Hay buddy!
Mind reviewing a poem?
It's called Sense.
Thanks! :}
formerly ZlyWilk

Finally achieving my dreams. Dive into a unique horror story.
  





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Wed Jan 25, 2012 4:01 am
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thetraveler says...



Hey do you mind reviewing this poem I wrote?
[url]viewtopic.php?f=196&t=92939[/url]
Thanks!
Cheers,
thetraveler
"Elementary, my dear Watson"
:D :D :D
Spoiler! :
SPOILED!!!
  





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Thu Jan 26, 2012 1:02 am
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Jas says...



Done with both!


Anyone need a review? :]
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~
  





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Mon Jan 30, 2012 1:22 am
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Jas says...



Bummmp. Anyone need a review?
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~
  





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Thu Feb 23, 2012 3:44 am
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Jas says...



Anyone?

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I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~
  





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Mon Feb 27, 2012 2:22 pm
DragonGirl11 says...



Hey Jas! Do you do chapters? If so, could you please review this?Chapter 1
And, if you'd like, Chapter 2 :D Thank you! (If not, that's alright, have a nice day :))
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~K.C. Oxford

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Tue Mar 06, 2012 12:26 am
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Jas says...



I've done chapter one and I'll do number 2 tonight!

Anyone else?
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~
  





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Tue Mar 06, 2012 7:45 pm
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thebookworm says...



Could you review my short story? work.php?id=93844 And my poem? work.php?id=93847
"The one thing I regret about reading is not being able to live the lifes and adventures of the characters. Maybe that's why I want to write; to create a story that somebody else would want to live."- Me
  





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Mon May 28, 2012 4:07 pm
Jas says...



Open again!
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~
  





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Tue May 29, 2012 9:31 pm
NeitherHereNorThere says...



If you could review my first work on here, that would be great! Thank you!
(It can be found posted on my wall)
I am here nor there.
  





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