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Mon Dec 19, 2011 4:26 pm
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TwistedMuffins says...



Hi there!

I guess, I need to review. My reviewing is going slow, thus I need someone to push me to it. That's why I come to you.

What I can review:

Poems. I do Poems. Any type of poem will do, but a poem.
Short-Stories. Again, any type!
Photography and Art.

What I might review:

Scripts.
Novels: But only the first chapter. And if I've read the first, then the second, and it goes on. But only if I've read the first (chapter).

What I won't review:

Lyrics.
Fan-fictions. Unless it is:

Artemis Fowl related.
Eragon related. (The Inheritance Cycle)
Harry Potter related.

So please feel free to post here!

-TwistedMuffins~ ^^
Last edited by TwistedMuffins on Thu Jun 28, 2012 7:16 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Tue Jan 03, 2012 2:50 am
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Hamingway says...



I would love it if you reviewed this for me viewtopic.php?f=10&t=92260 thank you
  





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Wed Jan 04, 2012 4:46 pm
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TwistedMuffins says...



Hey there, Hamingway!

I would love to review your poem, but you have already got two awesome reviews, so there isn't really much for me to correct! Though, I really like your poem!

If there is anything else you want me to review, feel free to post it here!

-TwistedMuffins!
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Thu Jan 05, 2012 12:29 am
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Hamingway says...



Yeah, no problem, I had put that in, and then those reviews came. And alright, I'm good at the moment, but thanks -Hamingway
  





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Sat Jan 07, 2012 9:02 am
mikepyro says...



viewtopic.php?f=5&t=83192&p=941637&hilit=randy#p941637

Would love a review on my piece Go to Hell (part 1 of 2 is listed)
It's got a few reviews, but I'd love just general thoughts and impressions of character/story/humor/style if you don't want to delve into grammar and structure :)
  





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Sat Jan 07, 2012 5:23 pm
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TwistedMuffins says...



Woah, Mike! xD You've got some 5+ reviews already! Though, I've still done it.
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Sat Jan 21, 2012 2:47 pm
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ShootingStars says...



Do you mind checking this out?
viewtopic.php?f=6&t=92618
Thanks!
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Sun Jan 22, 2012 4:04 pm
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SpeedyPencil says...



If you ever get round to it I'd greatly appriciate if you could review viewtopic.php?f=365&t=92863 this!
Thanks
-Speedy
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Wed Jan 25, 2012 12:08 am
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thetraveler says...



Hey, would you mind reviewing my poem, The Poets for me?
Much appreciated,
:D
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Wed Jan 25, 2012 12:45 am
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ShaunaJAY says...



Hello TwistedMuffins.. love the name :)

I would appreciate very much if you would review my poems. I am new here, I only have two pieces up so far. And of course if yoy qould like me to review anything of yours, no problem. xx
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