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Fri Dec 09, 2011 8:07 pm
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ArcticMonkey says...



Hey guys!
I'm back! You missed me?:)

Anyways, I'll keep this short and simple, you want a review? You got, it, just post a link at the bottom with the title of it and what forum it goes in. My strongest point in reviewing is short stories of any genre and my weak point is advanced critiques.
So please, request away!

-Arc ;)
(p.s. If it's fan-fiction, please state what the fan fiction is about because if it's something I've never heard of there I probably won't be that helpful, sorry :( )
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Fri Dec 09, 2011 9:00 pm
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MasterGrieves says...



topic91357.html
The Nation of Ulysses Must Prevail!

If you don't like Mikko, you better friggin' die.

The power of Robert Smith compels you!

Adam + Lisa ♥


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Keep your money in your shoes.


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Tue Dec 13, 2011 5:23 pm
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ArcticMonkey says...



Done with both! :) Who's next?
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Thu Dec 15, 2011 8:30 pm
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catslikebooks2 says...



Title: My dearest Walter
Forum: other (it's really like a short story, just in letter form)
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=91640
"You know how writers are... they create themselves as they create their work. Or perhaps they create their work in order to create themselves."-Orson Scott Card
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Fri Dec 16, 2011 2:55 am
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BerlynnRae says...



Would you mind reviewing my novella? Ghost of Theater Two?
Prolouge:
viewtopic.php?t=90746
Chapter one:
viewtopic.php?t=90955
I haven't had time to post the next chapters yet. Thanks so much! ~Berlynn Rae
  





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Sun Dec 18, 2011 12:49 pm
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ArcticMonkey says...



Done! -Who's next?
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Mon Dec 19, 2011 10:47 am
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emilybrodo says...



topic91742.html
Reviewing this for me would be awesome!!
“There are two ways to live: you can live as if nothing is a miracle; you can live as if everything is a miracle.” - Albert Einstein

The game

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Mon Dec 19, 2011 10:47 am
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Blues says...



Hi Arctic Monkey!

I need reviews on this please: topic91820.html

It's an other piece and it's the back story of how the world in my novel came into being.... from the one we live on now. Will you be able to check if anything isn't plausible/if there are inaccuracies or things that couldn't happen?

Thanks! I'll be glad to return the favour.

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Sun Jan 15, 2012 5:53 am
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AllessandreP says...



The work I'd like reviewed is my debut on my new profile:
viewtopic.php?f=361&t=92645
Its a fantasy, and it's called Elemental Lands: Intro
Thanks!
Allessandre P
I was on here as Allessandre, but I changed my email and forgot about this site for a while. By the time I came back, I'd forgtten my password. My old account
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