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Sat Dec 03, 2011 9:20 pm
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Lavvie says...



So I don't have to dig up my old one which failed spectacularly. This one won't. I promise.

I'll review any fiction. I'm terrible at poetry so don't even think about requesting that. And if it's part of a novel, start with the first chapter on or else I won't understand what's going on.

So. Without further ado: link, please!

PS. I reserve the right to decline any reviews as I like if you already have too many good reviews or for rating issues.
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Fri Dec 16, 2011 3:01 am
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BerlynnRae says...



Would you mind reviewing my novella? Ghost of Theater Two?
Prolouge:
viewtopic.php?t=90746
Chapter one:
viewtopic.php?t=90955
I haven't had time to post the next chapters yet. Thanks so much! ~Berlynn Rae
  





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Fri Dec 16, 2011 6:40 am
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mikepyro says...



If you wish I'd love a review on my novel Animal, the greatest novel on YWS (I base this on the fact that I am the world's greatest author, of course) :D

Here's Ch1. Be warned it is an 18+ piece, just for violence (no sex, drugs, cursing, etc)
viewtopic.php?t=83054

If you prefer a shorter piece, stand alone, I'd love a review on Bob the Tumor, a Cancerous Romantic Dramedy!
viewtopic.php?t=89285
  





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Fri Dec 16, 2011 7:41 am
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Lavvie says...



BerlynnRae - I've already reviewed that Prologue before! But I did review your first chapter now :D

Mykepyro - I'm sorry, but I must decline. You already have so many amazing reviews for each piece, I have nothing much to write in a review since it's already been stated.
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Sun Dec 18, 2011 2:23 am
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mikepyro says...



viewtopic.php?t=84163
Then perhaps this piece. It's one of my older works, 2 reviews only.
mwahahaha! ye shall not be rid of me so easily!
  





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Wed Dec 28, 2011 11:33 am
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Lavvie says...



This should totes be bumped. Reviews, anyone?
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Wed Dec 28, 2011 4:58 pm
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AquaMarine says...



I will love you forever if you review this!

viewtopic.php?f=361&t=92041
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Fri Dec 30, 2011 11:40 am
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Lavvie says...



Done! :D
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Fri Dec 30, 2011 8:29 pm
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tinkembell says...



Please could you review the second half of the first chapter of Spark? viewtopic.php?f=361&t=91618&p=944493#p944493. I think you reviewed the first part, so it shouldn't be confusing :).
"The rabbit always squeals in the jaws of the fox, but when has another rabbit ever rushed up to save it?" Damon Salvatore
;'( please, my lump, he just needs HUGS <3
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Sat Dec 31, 2011 10:00 pm
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Lavvie says...



Done, tink!
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Tue Jan 03, 2012 2:35 am
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Lavvie says...



Reviews anyone? With the challenge coming up, I'll be getting to the requested reviews first above anything else.
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Tue Jan 03, 2012 6:49 am
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SputnikSweetheart says...



Hello! I've read some of your reviews and I admire them greatly. Would you mind reviewing my short story Organ Donor?

Thanks!
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Tue Jan 03, 2012 7:58 am
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Lavvie says...



Thanks, Sputnik! I appreciate the comment. I'll review that first tomorrow :D
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Tue Jan 10, 2012 1:07 pm
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Lavvie says...



Bump! Reviews?
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Tue Jan 17, 2012 3:25 am
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Rascalover says...



Can you review my short story please?
viewtopic.php?f=5&t=92681
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

*points are given to anyone who gives me a review :) * My Novel novel.php?id=223

Who needs a review? :) topic38078.html
  








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